Reviews for An Heir And In The Same Breath Regret
Guest chapter 10 . 3/31
I loved this story! It was great. So many emotions in just 10 pages.
Guest chapter 10 . 2/24/2017
I'm still stunned by this beautiful story.
All characters were perfectly in character and the relationships between them wonderfully portrayed.
The plot was stringent and i loved all the platonic Ryan/Esposito interaction.
My only point of critique would be the Ryan family. They were over the top and unbelievable since I doubt a family would actually treat a member like this, even if they didn't like him.
But all in all this story was one of the best I've read in a while
Burnt Skull chapter 10 . 11/30/2015
That was fucking awesome. You wrote it perfectly. It's so hard to find Ryan centered fanfics, especiall ones that are well writen. Congrats, you did great on this.
Athena Silverwolf chapter 10 . 12/12/2014
I sincerely hate you for the whirlwind of stress and anxiety you just put me through reading this. Yet somehow, by chance, I adore this story.
Guest chapter 10 . 11/23/2014
You don't know how glad I am that you've updated this. This was a perfect ending to a very well written and fantastic story. I'm glad Ryan got the closure he needed with his family. And that he discovered who his real family was. The last scene was super cute and unexpected but really great. It would be fun if you wrote a short epilogue with aunt Fiona meeting Ryan, Jenny, and the team. Otherwise I think this story is one of the best fanfics on this site and I can't wait til you decide to start a new one :) :)
patty cake rocks chapter 10 . 11/22/2014
ohmy god. this chapter. WWAS AWESOME and yet s sad
jae chapter 10 . 11/20/2014
You made my day! A great ending to this fabulous story. All the details have been wrapped up so beautifully. A well crafted and very entertaining story!
BlackWolfe chapter 10 . 11/20/2014
I've been waiting for this chapter for forever! I'm so glad you posted it instead of not giving this story a resolution, The ending could not have been any better in my opinion!
Detective Writer Cop chapter 10 . 11/19/2014
Ahhhhhh! This was so good! I was really happy you wrote this chapter because for the longest time we've been waiting for this! Awesome!
Yammy1983 chapter 10 . 11/19/2014
loved it!
HeadCaseInJuly27 chapter 10 . 11/19/2014
Wait, you're just gonna end it right there? No. Not cool. Not cool at all!
Aeryn Lavanthia chapter 10 . 11/19/2014
An amazing story! And that last line at the end brought a tear to my eye :) Wonderfully done!

A quick note, only because I really like this story and your writing, there are a few typos dotted around. Nothing major but it helps when reading if they are corrected :)
TXMedic chapter 10 . 11/19/2014
Yay! I'm so glad you updated. :-) Very nicely done, and I loved the ending.
parkrstark chapter 10 . 11/19/2014
I oove this chapter! I just wanna give kevin a big hug!

I've enjoyed the ride for this story so much and i just can't believe it's over. I loved reading it all, but half of me wishes it didn't have to endXD
phnxgrl chapter 10 . 11/19/2014
I loved this long strange journey of a story. I loved how Kate got Keenan to confess to murdering her brother. Kudos.
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