I'll be the first to admit that I had abandoned this project a while back, but given the recent interest I'm more than happy to pick it up again! I'm currently working a full time job, but I should be able to produce another chapter within a few weeks.

Great story! I really enjoyed your style and descriptive narration, and it's nice that there were not many mistakes. I look forward to reading more!

lol, I haven't gone to kaiator yet and I've been playing Tera for several months now...

Good references to help other readers who are new to this game or have an interest in trying it out. I approve.

Cool. Looking forward to more.

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Glad your story is finally here. I already gave my review already so I hope you don't mind short one :P I forgot to voice a few things.

Firstly, I personally think this is good start. It has the whole mystery genre from the beginning to the end and thats a really good thing. Secondly, I'm glad the plot is given from the get go. Just don't make it too obvious for us haha. It's well worth the effort to have a descriptive writing that balances out with the presentation and you've done just that. I would advice that you keep in mind the flow and transitions. It's one of the many problems that new writers have.

Aside from that good job! And publishing a story doesn't take very long. About a few minutes or so.

I'll keep an eye for the next chapter so good luck and thanks for the read.