Reviews for I guard the world
Sonia25 chapter 122 . 7/11
Why would harry or even any self respecting person wants to be with a whore lol what a unrealistic story. Tonks becomes whore willingly because someone dumped her and you are trying to blame Charlie for it lol it was tonks decision to become slut and she wants to get everyone's sympathise how she has suffered I am pretty she enjoyed all of her sex life so crocodile tears doesn't even work. The slut tonks get jealous when harry even kisses someone. Harry is vergin because he can't have sex it's against the rule of feminazy so he should remain vergin and settle for the whore. What a pathetic piece of shit story. The writter is big hypocrite no doubt about it
Sonia25 chapter 1 . 7/11
So a story of vergin Harry and slut tonks the idea itself is ridiculous so not interested in reading
Guest chapter 11 . 6/16
Also if you want to be more philosophical about it, it CAN! mean “judge its actions not its looks or words.”
JadeViper chapter 10 . 1/21
So how old is are the students when they go to hogwarts?ni can't remember if you said he was 13 or not but If you should tell me that would be great.
PoorR1chard chapter 9 . 10/20/2019
Harry be pulling a Kakashi!
kyuubifire25 chapter 3 . 8/9/2019
very funny and sapencefull, with just the right amount of action,love,lust and all-around greatness

very well done

Kyuubifire
kirosyamcha chapter 123 . 5/15/2019
im going to guess this story died the death of a thousand deaths since its been three years:(
kirosyamcha chapter 110 . 5/15/2019
so i dont exactly remember but were the elves ever actually described or are they just different versions of house elves, or do they look more humaneske, in what most people think of elves(beautiful) ?
kirosyamcha chapter 87 . 5/14/2019
hmm what ever happened to fleur and the letter? its been a bit since i read that so maybe it was a different story but if it not, shouldnt something have been mentioned or come from that by now?
kirosyamcha chapter 79 . 5/14/2019
didnt the council of light ask for many more billions than that? . might want to update that part as well
kirosyamcha chapter 78 . 5/14/2019
equel or rival is the same thing in that situation
kirosyamcha chapter 34 . 5/14/2019
I like this story but every time I think about what they look like all I can think of is a disfigured cousin to Frankenstein (nymph in her true form also)
kirosyamcha chapter 5 . 5/14/2019
find the story mostly hilarious :d
Chyllen chapter 35 . 5/10/2019
Honestly I'm finding this boring.. it's just lacking something idk more realistic I just can't connect to the plot and the fact that EVERY Time he fights he ends up in the hospital so far with more gross scares and deformed in some way both he and Tonks
Chyllen chapter 15 . 5/10/2019
I disagree with the statement of the past is the past bull shit I don't care how good a person is or in love a couple is once the argue over something and one gets hurt he or she WILL bring up the past just to hurt the other example... Toni's catches Harry hugging or giving another girl a kiss on the cheek or the top of the head giving comfort for some reason or another Tonks gets jealous and mad and hurt says something stupid and hurts Harry in turn he then would feel slighted and in turn all he would have to say is with all your time in broom closets and on your knees for other boys you have no right to be mad at me for giving comfort. End ..And with his past of not having control he would not let even Tonks push him about and make him feel bad it's only natural to hurt anyone who hurts you in turn even over a mistaken situation that's just life
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