ooh my that was bone chilling, and yet sweet. I loved it. I wish that the show would have done more with Pan!Henry to be honest and this quelled my thirst. Fantastic.

OHMEGOSH THAT WAS AMAZING! I totally loved how the characters are in character. -.- it's so hard to find one where Peter is actually bad and not 'oh, i'm so bad, look i'm kicking this puppy!" and everyone else is just like 'oh, Peter you poor thang, why don't you get a hug and cry your little eyes out on me! you must have been through so much to kick that puppy!' -_- get what I mean? Anyway, I really liked this! I don't really think Rumple would be so open and sharing with Henry, but I still liked it and it was really good! :D Keep up the amazing writing!

Wow. I forgot that this was Pan!Henry (even though you wrote it in the summary) and I absolutely froze when I read "You can't forget Peter Pan." It's been a long time since I've felt that reading a story; it is amazing when writing does that. Your Pan and Rumple are astounding.

Well, that's rather messed up. But very heartwarming. :D

I wish this had happened instead of the "I never loved you" route they took with Pan. I didn't mind that they made Pan a villain but why did they have to make him 100 percent irredeemably evil? I miss the complex, sympathetic anti-villains from the first two seasons.

I totally agree with you I love their twisted father-son relationship I don't understand why people like to think of them as brothers or something instead. Can you please continue this? Make it an AU or something there's rarely any stories that even hint at peter's and rumple's father son relationship like this.

Oh God I loved this. I really do love Pan and Rumple's horrible dysfunctional hot mess of a relationship too. I really wish Pan could've really loved his son... Even though he has Belle and Bae and maybe possibly Henry, Rumple may still long for some parental love... anyways. Awesome one shot :)

that was perfect. . . I just loved their dysfunctional relationship too

This is great! I jnew it was Pan in Henry but at times I just thought it was a sweet talk between and grandson and grandfather

I loved this! I do hope you can continue and write more!

Oh god yes! A twisted bonding fic between Pan and Rumple! *squees* There just isn't enough fics about their messed up relationship. Thank you for sharing this well written story.

aww I had A warm fuzzy Feeling that last part { I want the Real Henry and Rumple to close !