Go Merry Tales? You're going to follow Luffy after he separates to start his own crew?

*Runs around squealing in delight*

I was wondering how over protective the brothers are. Nice to see they are willing to let Luffy fight his own battles. Otherwise how will he be prepared for his own crew?

What on EARTH did that poor soul tell/do to Luffy? :o O.o

ooooOOOOH I really like this! Everyone seeing a hint of the ridiculously strong monster hell become!

I love these snippets in their lives.

Really loved this. Would love to know what waken Ace's haoushoku since with Sabo still being there, the fire in Grey Terminal never happened. Also wonder what pissed Luffy off so much.

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Woah that was intense and I love how you added it
Keep on the writes

Very nice work describing the sheer terror that is Luffy's will. Also the funny end line about the siblings

:)

Argh, this was amazing. The emotion in it was beautiful and it was really moving how they let Luffy fight his own battle despite it being difficult to watch. (And the fact that Luffy won through his sheer force of will, ugh it's soooooo gooood.) I really really loved this and this series is awesome.

you should put all the moby dick stories into one thing. Each chapter can be different, that's ok. That way they are all in one place :)

Ha I love all of your stories
But I normaly don't review.

This... Was so... CUTE

I love the parenthesis they are hilarious and I'm just going to laugh till i die now

I love your Moby dick's Tales... Laugh all the way trough!
Please do some more!