Please update soon! I would like to see what happens next!

Interesting

It was a very nice read this fic was. I honestly forgot about that guy who killed their moms, but that’s mostly because on how u sometimes skipped certain scene from the franchise so I assumed that it just happened when Azula was held in the Boiling Rock. So what happened to “Away from the South”? I forgives you deleted and probably the why since that sequel was up when this one wasn’t even finished.

So r u still planning to release the sequel, just you know rewritten? Never read it when it was up and kind of wished it was still up to get a glance in what is happening with Korra.

Im disappointed you know , its just like you were writing book version of avatar series , azula didnt change anything at all . There is just extra name in the group .

Im disappointed you know , its just like you were writing book version of avatar series , azula didnt change anything at all . There is just extra name in the group .

Continue this story, please?

I just finished reading this story and it was awesome, i know i am years late but, i need more chapters lol

Still waiting for the next chapter, why you hadn't updated?

I love your story it is so good please update it! It's one of the best azula fanfic I read and I love that yue suki and katara all are with azula! They make a very well and interesting pair! All the other ones work will too and so of them I did not see coming! All the different parts of is story are so out there like azula having a twin sister and that they both are Shadow benders! yet you make it all come together so will like it was all way like that! I really what to see what you will come up with next with azula facing her last demon and with how katara saku and yue will react to it!

You get is wrong. Azula was a genius and she can use fire since she was 3 years old.

why are you giving aang so much credit? he is kinda ooc-ing here. you keep stealing lines. and i think mai and ty lee should be apart of azula's harem too.

the story has a great plot and I really hope you will update soon however I have 2 major issue with it wich are pacing and character development wich are just of moods and emotion are like flipping a switch in this story while realisticly these are gradual things if you would focus on fix in this than you have a story to wich others would be compared to

Update please...

I'm not enjoying the 'POOF' YOU'RE IN LOVE thing. It's very annoying as falling in love or having deep emotions for an individual needs time to manifest and then more time for the person to realise it and decide on a course of action with said emotion. Also you are breaking so many rules of typical human nature. The characters are bland and the story is all over the place. I will repeat that I do enjoy the story, you have a brilliant idea, spot on progression, a decent plot. It's just you need to work on the flow and characterization. Also I love the shadow bender idea but you could have done so much with it, such wasted potential.

I love the idea I love the progression the little arcs and such but my biggest issue is it doesn't invoke any feeling in me. I have to reword scenes and arrange certain events before I feel like there's a story and I love everything about this fic (there are a few things I wish to change but that's me) but it's so emotionless and bland and scenes can be better described. As well as typos and such. It would be in your best interest to get a beta who specialises in story flow.