Reviews for The Hard Times of Marshall Lee |
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![]() ![]() ![]() You could always have him sacrifice himself for her. Honestly the sacrifice thing kinda works since the dream he had kind of read like a croak dream. So if he dies for Fiona...(Dark: PLEASE! I love seeing my favorite characters on the verge of death! It's when they are truly at their best!) Says the sadist... The question is whether he dies permanently or if a plot device saves him at the last second. Best advice I've got. Hope it helps. |
![]() ![]() I hope u know that by doing this you're putting expectations way way up. Oh well- do what you're comfortable with dude. I'll be eagerly awaiting the update. ️ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel for you. Same thing happened to me with some of my stories. You should do what you think is right. So if you feel like you should reboot the story because you're having a difficult time finding a direction to take it in or because the story didn't come out the way you wanted it to then you should do it. It's better to make a story you're proud and confident on rather than dishing out a story that you feel like you could have made better. So good luck to you in your future endeavors. |
![]() ![]() I think you have a great future as a writer. I can't wait for the next chapter. I will be looking forward to it. |
![]() ![]() Wow, I just read your story and I think you are a great writer. You could have a future writing. Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You really like need to update |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was great your really talented keep up the work I can't wait! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Epic emotion drama and job on chapter.. It awesome the way he told ashely off but I got feeling she's not done yet.. and can't waif to hear his song bout Fionna xD |
![]() ![]() Dude you HAVE abandoned the story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's kinda confusing, but meh, loves ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay ! BUBBA IS SUCH A GOOD FRIEND ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() BOOOOO ! GAWD, FI ! LOVING THIS ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just... read it all. It's really good, and it gives me a lot of feelings ;u; Thanks for writing it, and I hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay! just update okay? |