To było doskonałe. Wróciłam tu po czasie i będę tu co jakiś czas wracać bo warto

I'm glad you showed what happened to Sarah. would've felt unfinished otherwise.

Toby you dummy, why would you make that story known to a wider public? oy vey.

Dreams turned to nightmares.. the snakes.. eeek.

I felt the same the first time I wrote a lemon scene. I didn't wanna be gaudy but I felt like I didn't do a good enough job.

Now that is an interesting reason for his pendant.

hmm the cleaners are nothing compared to the real dark characters of the Labyrinth

interesting theory with the no stars

Thank you for sharing your story

I read this achingly beautiful creation tonight. My being resounded in full answer to the vast range of passions stirred to glorious life through the power of your story. Magnificent. Thank you.

This is brilliant and lovely and thank you so much!
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When I heard the name Sophie Bennett I immediately thought of Rise of the Guardians... and once I finish the last chapter I think I will seek out any Labyrinth crossovers with RotG because I think they would be pretty interesting.
(also great fic by the way)

OH. MY. GOD. You are a fantastic writer! I can't wait to finish reading this. Bravo! Bravo!

I also have no idea why it's so popular in fan fiction to have someone shout "I'm coming!" like the announcement needs to be a part of their pleasure. Maybe it's just me but that's a freaking mood killer; you're not actually involved in love making you're just trying to reach orgasm in a quick fuck. It seems... almost clinical. Yes you want, or should want, to bring your partner pleasure but if you have to announce yourself to let them know what you're experiencing it just seems like the focus is not on each other but instead on what one can gain from sexual action. You might as well be with a stranger, not your lover.

I have never understood why people would run away from the fantastic, from worlds of magic and mystery, and cling to this mundane world. Even if I was totally satisfied with my life here, I'd still probably run toward fantasy.