Good ME crossover story where Harry isn't some immortal all powerful being.
Shame the author seems to have disappeared from the Earth.

This was good, too bad it's unfinished though

Great story. I’m guessing that promised sequel isn’t coming, then?

Garbage . Author ignores logic for fake drama ..yuk ...

and that's why, I'm out dragon den style

I know it had to happen, but pulling barriers and magic tech out of a hat all of a sudden. Its just doesn't do the story justice.

Yes, Harry, pay more attention to the conversation than the gun fight.

i live by this code when reading fanfics: dont like dont read dont flame.

Seems like you wrote it planning for a sequel... but there's no sequel wtf?

not complete - a story is complete if everything is solved. Here are many open ends

Please continue this story... It is amazing

Has the document format gotten so annoying that you stopped posting altogether?

is there going to be a sequel

Good to know you fucking had no plans for a second story after this one. Fuck you, you stupid fucking piece of shit.

I hate you. A lot.