I love this and was reading the second story and now I can’t find it

I love this story, even though it makes me cry every time I read it. Poor Tim:( I can understand him feeling that way
Wish there was more.

A good one

Please add more chapters if you can! It's so good!

Nicely done. :D

I was wondering If I was the only who noticed that NO ONE checked on mcgee right after the explosion or even mentioned him for several hours. IT was like they suddenly forgot he existed. It was very strange

I've been reading and enjoying the sequel (despite a personal rule about reading WIP's), but only just today read this, and it's terrific! I love Tim Angst, and this is perfect with how he's feeling. Kudos, and thank you for sharing!

Poor Tim. Why do bad things always happen to the nicest people?

wow, love Tim's reaction. Yeah sometimes that is obvious on the show. He always treats the others differently than he does Tim.

Oh wish their is more to this story it is excellent. maybe them looking into the fact that tim has no family, tony's and gibbs reaction.

Keep on Writing.

Excellent story and sadly oh so true.
McGee seems to be the tag along in NCIS. He's always overlooked and he's too often kicked down by his team mates. Gibbs ignored him before when Tim got glass in him after NCIS blew up. I really don't understand it although many writers seem to think it has to do with Tim having family as back up. I don't think so after seeing how his dad treated him and his sister isn't all that nice either. I LIKE Tim.

Wow! That was deep. Good story.

Very sad, tears here!

Wow, that definitely got me right in the feelings. Favouriting incase there's more!

so very awesome also very sad

Very good story. I like the Tim centered stories. There's not enough of them. Hope this turns into a series.