I really hope you continue this bacause I totally love this Story
I would love to read more and to see Zack and Cloud together and maybe see the others come back alive again as well so yeah I look forward to the rewrite and can't wait to read more.

And hope you didn't abandon it.
Regards
Lunary

Hi,
nice style of writing but quit the story after the first chapter... Really? A battle hardened 1st class SOLDIER betrayed by most people he knew and close to death doesn't question people he knows nothing about like a naive little kid after he woke up in an unknown place?... I really hate this kind of plots - sorry

The SOLDIER Uniform is black, not grey.

When I said more of FFVII world? Yeah no, NOT like this. It's ridiculously cliche and I really wish people would stop SUMMONING SEPHIROTH ALREADY

Kind of wish you'd ended it in the graveyard tbh - at least tell me we get more from Gaia after this? Like, zap some Turks over or something :/ The mesh so far is pretty good, but it's starting to feel like there's less of Zack's world than Harry's and I really just don't want to continue in a barely-there-FFVII story

This fic is really well written so far; the way you create each character is realistic and avoids being too over the top. You've done a good job with keeping unneeded exposition out of the picture, and the plot so far has blended the two worlds nicely :) Kudos to you - I really am enjoying this fic 3

why was he sorted in the first place, he's an adult so he shouldn't be going to a secondary school.

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I'm hoping for some Zack Fleur lol that relationship would be so funny to me the puppy and the bird

How could Harrys name come out, there is NO WAY that Barty Jr got his hands on anything with Harry's signature let alone it as Harry Potter.

I wonder why isn't he more paranoid of being in a new place? Then again, dont have the handle of the FF guys.

Can I just point out how redundant Vincents threat was? This takes place after Zack staged an escape with Cloud, dragged his catatonic carcass across a sea and two continents, and then almost died protecting him...how does any of that imply he has any sort of malicious intent?

Love it wish you can continue it here also.

Yay for Zack helping Cloud out with his night terror. :) Cloud's so cute, and I love how perfectly Zack fits his nickname.

Love Vincent confronting Zach over his intentions/feelings towards Cloud, and then springing his relation to Sephiroth on him. :)