I hope Flora will be alright! And if it helps, I still like Winx Club and this story. Keep up the good work!

I am truly loving the way you twisted both these series into something more epic than either one could be.

What a Dark Chapter. I did not expect Flora to have a dark side to her. Who knows who else could have a dark side to them?

I just love seeing a dark side to someone. I didn't expect that someone to be Flora. It's always the nice ones you have to watch out for, huh? Keep it up!

Finally! A fairy that gets the main role, and she ISN'T Bloom! Thank you very much! I've been waiting for a Chapter like this. Love how it was dark too. I can't wait to see what you have next in store!

This, by far, is the best Chapter I have ever read. I'm sad that WITCH ended, and I'm a bit iffy on how Winx Club is going. I'm glad you have this Story to make both of them better. Seeing a whole other side of Flora is good character development. I can't wait to see how you tackle the rest of the Story when you get to the other characters. It's also cool how you have Selina as a double agent for Bloom. It shows that she's not so insecure anymore. Please update when you can!

Critique
Some chapter in a story are much better than others. This chapter is definitely a 10 on the story scale. If you're not exactly sure what I mean, you might consider cutting down your FanFic intake just a bit. But lets not hold that against the episode. Let's also not hold the title, which is the 5th episode to be titled "Soandso Returns," because at least this time it makes some contextual sense.

This chapter doesn't really go out of it's way to make a hell of a lot of sense, but it doesn't dwell on anything like the last train wreck of a chapter, and for once, the characters aren't always one-sided now. This is one of the key chapters of the story, so you would expect a bit of a higher quality for it than normal, and I think it delivers what it promises. Yeah, it goes off on the power of friendship trope a lot, but that's pretty standard for Winx Club and WITCH in general. This is a good chapter to read though, and it brings resolution to the biggest story arc of the FanFic.

Rating: 4.8 stars out of 5, and Thumbs up!

I love how you made Flora darker here, as well as the chapter. I was waiting for the aftermath of Stormy's death. Keep up the good work!

This had to be one of my most favorite chapters. Not only was it more dramatic, but it had a dark side of Flora. Boy, this Hedera sure knows business. I like how Selina is a double agent. Things are bound to go south with these Paladins now involved. I am so excited to see what happens!

I loved how you brought out Flora's badder side in this Chapter. It makes things better. I hope to see the dark side of other Fairies and Main Characters later on.

The Darkest Chapter of this Story, and it is awesome! I admit, there is a bit of blood here and there, but it's about time the Winx Club was made dark. I hope that there's more stuff, not exactly like this, but somewhat like this, in the future!

Finally, the mushy stuff is over! You have blood and more mature stuff for Winx, something that made this franchise better, that, and the weapons you put in. I can't wait until more comes! Hope to see more soon!

Never seen this side of Flora before! Whoa, dark. I can't wait for the Sorcerer's Sword to come!

Good chapter. Please update it. You're welcome . I felt happy.

Hey good chapter. You're welcome and update please .