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Ooh, good on you for explaining why Danny could see Phantom when he was invisible to everyone else. I was waiting for that. And a nice ending! I was hoping for a nice ending rather than Phantom getting caught in the ghost shop. I was still sorta worried that was going to be the cliffhanger for the sequel. And for all that would've been interesting, I was in the mood for happy, and I got happy. *grins* Nice, logical progression. Phantom seems to know a fair bit about the human realm to figure all that out.

Still can't fathom precisely where you're going with the sequel, though. The title isn't enough of a bone for me to gnaw on and get much out of it. A question of whether or not something is worth paying the price for something else, as in sacrifices, or whatever comes of the infusion thing-the costs more so than the benefits, I'm guessing-or of Danny's keeping his silence all this time (I'm assuming he's going to keep this promise at least until the sequel). Something along the lines of "It's a price that needs to be paid." (except multiple prices) or "You'll just have to pay the price." or otherwise that cost that comes from actions taken. Can't guess the actual plot, though. Guess I'll have to see when you write it!

Cool :) really liked this story keep up the good work

I'm glad Danny's made it back to his Mom! And all thanks to Phantom.

I think what you mean is the information counter? Or the concierge? I don't really think the public would be open to the security rooms where all the security footage would be kept. A bit too private.

Since I really love chocolate chip cookies (I wonder how invisible ones taste like? :D), I'll chance a guess. I think it's rather obvious that Phantom and Danny are going to fuse together to become Danny Phantom. And the title 'Prices' suggests that a lot of prices will be paid. Unless I'm totally wrong and the prices the title refers to is really the price of the toy rocket.

When Phantom decided to help out Danny, it was so sugary sweet. How old is Phantom in this fic? Do I have to read on? I keep imagining Phantom to be the same age as Danny.

Since you're writing this in third person, I don't think the POV is really necessary. I usually like it better that way. But this is only my opinion. Usually this follows the preference of the author.

May I also suggest the use of more paragraph spacing? A wall of text can often be daunting to a reader.

Other than that, I think it's a really adorable piece of fiction. Keep it up!

Great job! Sorry, I was too lazy to sign in ...

Aww aren't they adorable? Funny, I think that's pretty close to how my last review started, ah, well. ;-)

Infused huh? Interesting for sure, can't wait to see where this all goes in the sequel, which I would definitely want to read! If I was Phantom, I would be pretty freaked out upon discovering the kid I'm apparently infused with has ghost hunters for parents. Not fun, not fun at all. *shiver*

Anyway, cute story and I can't wait for the sequel!
Good Luck!

Aww, five year old Danny is so adorable! I really like Phantom's though process as well, it's interesting hearing how Danny would think had he been a full on ghost and lived in the Zone and what not. I like your little headcannon there, using ectoplasm to allow a human to see a ghost thats invisible, interesting. Only kind of AU? Huh, can't wait to figure that one out, on to the next chapter!

(P.S. I believe 'limited third person P.O.V' was the term you were looking for)

Amazing :D

Oooh now that was a cute story! The ending was clever and not what I was expecting, kudos! I still smile each time I imagine a little Danny, he'd be the cutest thing wouldn't he? Anyway, very well done, I look forward to the sequel :). I wonder whether you might time jump? Or perhaps Maddie might suspect something with the rocket? A very enjoyable read!

SO COOT! :D

Cool story! :)

Awww little Danny is so cute, I can't get over it :) I'm curious as to how Danny could see Phantom even though he remained invisible. Was the ectoplasm special ghost-seeing ectoplasm or something? Anyway, still loving the story and will be eagerly awaiting the sequel!

Awesome! :D What about the rocket though?

That ending sure suprised me... waiting to see how it will turn out!