| Reviews for It all started with an Elevator Ride |
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Guest chapter 2 . 3/25/2015 This is done? |
LuresaSWTOR chapter 1 . 11/14/2014 OMG! You are evil! roflmao, good story, but you are still a stinker! :P |
Guest chapter 2 . 7/28/2014 Update? |
Guest chapter 2 . 5/19/2014 Third Chapter! |
draco-lover 667 chapter 2 . 5/11/2014 I like where the story is going. Keep up the good work. |
dramione143 chapter 2 . 4/18/2014 Why is this marked as complete? |
pride97 chapter 1 . 4/9/2014 One suggestion, please make sure that you pick one narrative. You started in 3rd person (saying "Hermione and Ginny" and then switched to 1st person ("I"). Your last section you continually switch back and forth. One way to make this fiction superb is to correct those mistakes. Most of the time you're using 3rd person (omniscient), so just going through and correcting the "I's" and putting the right wording should fix it all. |
Maggieblock chapter 2 . 4/1/2014 Hope you continue. Can't wait to see what happens next! |
Nienna Perks chapter 2 . 2/21/2014 This is marked as complete...is the smut coming or not? lol! |
StarGirlPotter chapter 2 . 2/12/2014 PLEASE UPDATE! And you can maybe have Gin call him and suggest a three-way, for an upcoming chapter. Imagine how hot that'd be to see/read. |
shaymars chapter 2 . 2/4/2014 Please continue the story... |
guest chapter 2 . 2/4/2014 oh God, this is awful (i'm sorry but it's true) |
Guest chapter 2 . 2/4/2014 Nice set up, I look forward to the next chapter. |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/4/2014 I can't get over just how bad this story is. People actually like this garbage? I have read takeout menus that made more sense. |
Anon chapter 1 . 2/2/2014 EXTEND IT. IT WOULD BE SUCH A GREAT STORY |