| Reviews for Destiny's Arrow |
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Guest chapter 10 . 8/1/2016 Please update ~~ ! Please? o(﹏)o |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/22/2016 nice fic! please update |
Guest chapter 10 . 10/2/2015 An interesting story. Very well written. I am new to crossover stories and have enjoyed this immensely. I look forward to your next chapter. Thank you |
Furionknight chapter 9 . 9/23/2015 I look forward to more :) |
Furionknight chapter 8 . 8/26/2014 I look forward to more :) |
thepkrmgc chapter 8 . 6/15/2014 good to see that aranel has chosen the side with mountains of gold, i wonder how much swag she can cart off before the fighting starts? |
thepkrmgc chapter 7 . 6/15/2014 im surprised that thranduil hasnt tried to recruit aranel for his devious plan, not that it would have worked mind you... |
thepkrmgc chapter 6 . 6/15/2014 a crushing prison would make smaug into little more then a pincusion, and i cant wait to see your take on the war of five armys |
thepkrmgc chapter 5 . 6/15/2014 darn immortal elves, its totally in character for a dalish to be impressed by that stuff but she's got the whole 30 year warden lifespan going on. |
thepkrmgc chapter 4 . 6/15/2014 ok so i was wrong about the hawk, but its interesting to see a dalish mage warden |
thepkrmgc chapter 3 . 6/15/2014 i think that maenor is a shape-shifted morrigan, no natual bird is capable of such hate |
thepkrmgc chapter 2 . 6/15/2014 i have to agree with aranel, the hedonism and aloofness of LOTR elves is atrocious: the DA elves are much more interesting |
thepkrmgc chapter 1 . 6/15/2014 i like how youve melded the cannons, but if the warden commands such respect then why did she refrain from intervening earlier? |
Phant0m5 chapter 1 . 6/8/2014 This is looking like a really neat fanfic, I'm looking forward to reading up to the current chapter. My only concern so far is having Middle Earth and Thedas exist in the same world, instead of involving a magic boundary. Of course given the circumstances this is the easiest way to have done it, giving the Warden clout with the elven king, but Thedas and Middle Earth are not quite same-y enough to make a seamless world. Oh well. Onwads to the next chapter! |
Fortune's Fool 1597 chapter 5 . 1/17/2014 Another good chapter! The end part made me quite sad - the plight of the Dalish is one of those tragic things in Dragon Age, and it comes across even more so here because of the contrast between them and the immortality of the LOTR elves. Poor Legolas is trying to be reassuring but there isn't really much he can say in this situation, is there? Good job at summarising the relationship between the elves and dwarves. I think you're spot-on when you say that the Dalish and dwarves hold no animosity towards each other, but they're not exactly friends either. They will still fight together when the time comes though, which is something Thranduil didn't do for the Erebor dwarves. It will be even more interesting to see how Aranel reacts if she meets any of the humans from Laketown (perhaps Bard?) given the distrust and dislike of the Dalish for humans. Nice job, keep it up! |