I like this twist, where they mutually sacrifice for each other.

Yup, definitely how it should've ended! And omg you wrote it in Veronica's style perfectly! XDD

Man, the feeeeellllls are strong with this one.

This is how it should have ended,

I can't believe this story only has a few reviews - it was great! It was def an ending that satisfied my wayyyy more than the original ending of the series, and it was really well written - I felt like you wrote in Tris's POV just like Veronica Roth. :)

I've had a slight obsession with the divergent series since I read it the past 4 days (all three, the transfer, free four, divergent again) but like many fans the ending to allegiant was unsettling. That being said, I thought about writing an alternate ending but I don't have to because what I would have done, you just did. To me that is the best ending that never happened. Great job! Caleb finally redeemed himself :)

One word. Amazing

Love this ending so much better