Please please update soon I love your story and can’t wait for more!

This story is entirely too original and well written for the amount of reviews it has gathered. I highly doubt this story hasn't been abandoned, so I'm going to miss all of the characters that you've written so accurately, yet managed to change so beautifully to match your AU.

This is possibly going to be the strangest review you've ever gotten, but here goes: I can't read any more of this because it's too good.

The thing is, I know you never finished this story. It's already heartbreaking enough without coming to an abrupt halt and *never knowing* what happens. If I stop on my own, it's somehow less frustrating. So I'll follow this story and hope that someday you finish it (or post the rest if it's finished and you somehow just never got around to it), and then I'll be able to continue.

You'll finish this, right? Because I couldn't stop reading it. It must be the most interesting fic I've read for a long time. ...well, not really 'interesting'... the readability of it, the ability to suck me in and refuse to let me go. I stayed up until about 3:30 in the morning before being able to tear myself away, and then ended up reading more right after waking up. And then after finding a place to stop, it didn't take long before I started thinking about it again and had read the rest. I kind'a hope I can figure out how you did that so I can try pulling off that kind of writing.
So... about the story itself... looks like Harry/Evan finally figured out it's the snake. That could lead to some things, especially if he tells Snape. I kind'a wonder if Harry/Evan could do what he did last time and just force him out. ...Although... he has amnesia. (I like amnesia) When that was first revealed, I thought there was a possibility he'd get another chance—but it seems he's still solidly him, with how he's now acting with Hermione and others. ...I suppose it's more like forgetfulness or regular memory loss, rather than the more uncommon variants of forgetting self. Anyhow, I love the fic.

please update! i'm so glad evan finally figured it out, but now you've left us hanging! all the more cruel because it's so well written;)

Man, this story is INCREDIBLE! SO SO SO GOOD, YOU ARE AMAZING. I hope you're okay, I know it's been ages since you've updated. I hope you find inspiration one day to draft the rest of the story, even if it's only dot points till you have the energy for more. It's so wonderful! And it feels like you were so close to a conclusion!

I love Evan, but I miss Harry? I want Evan to be able to go back to being Harry but I have a feeling you might keep him separate. Still loved this story!

God this story is a masterpiece

THIS IS SO GOOD! Please please please come back. I’m dying over here.

"Changed all the slips of paper to his name." Yes he would, wouldn't he? I love that.

lovely hint at his misery, having him pick down his fingers, classic early self-harming

Really interestimg story - taking your time to build all the characters' personalities in full x

Hi there! It's seems you haven't updated your story in a couple of years. I hope you rediscover your muse for it. This is such a unique story line, I don't think I've read anything quite like it. That's pretty rare these days. Anyway, wonderful work with where you are so far :)

I didn't realize this hadn't been updated since 2015 till I found my way back to your page. Shame, but I understand. I do still love this fic and come back to it at times.

I loved reading stone of Dreams meanwhile I'm reading Raising Potter