I hope u continue, this is amaaazing :)

I've seen a thing or two, but a gay pedophile, man you sure are working something up.

I want to know if he fucked either Makino or Shanks

Wtf

Plz do the next chapter already, this fanfic is so amazing like I am starting to use my own imagination as to see what would happen when he gets all his crew mates and when he meets boa hancock etc. Anyway your fanfic is absolutely terrific and I can't wait to see more

Your an excellent writer (new game plus is how ik) even if this is one of your early works...but I cant read a plot driven bi fic especially with my fav characters being in it. I just don't swing that way. Gonna go check that dbz fic since I just read a good one there and was checking the gsndom

Why am I even reading this? Well, anyways, since you've somehow forced me to read heavy slash I will congratulate you for your writing. Good job!... ugh

Please update pleaseeeeee !

That A/N worries me...

This could have gone so, SO badly... but you managed to keep it in line for the first chapter. Impressive.

So good Please don't stop now. What about sanji!?

Soooo good Looking forward to when he meets Sanji. I bet poor Sanji will be so confused

I have nothing against gay people but like God damn there's so much gay story. Atleast put it in the summary so people know.

aayyeee more bottom Luffy pls! bottom lu is best lu

Was that HTTYD ref on purpose? Movie 1 btw