plz continue this book
it's great

Liking the chapter

Just take over hitler-wanna-be's body and then beet the $h!t out of him...
Can't wait for more /

yay

i really like this fanfic its different and kinda cool KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

wahhh i like like this chapter alot of interesting stuff here and can't wait for more ;)

This is interesting _

I love this story! I think there aren't enought fanfics with Allen and Cross
And, I think that Mother's real name is Martha...

Yay! AN UPDATE! iM SO HAPPY!

More...must...have...MORE! Please...

You made Apochroas very well characterized. I'm glad u updated and please update ASAP ok _
Cause I love this story

Ok... Thats interesting...CROSS THINKS OF ALLEN AS A SON! KYAHHHHHHH...*coughcough*
I agree with you, Apocryphos is real creep... I simply hate him!
Nice chapter (even though its short) and I want to read Allen's reaction to Cross's appearence! So please dont take long...
Waiting the next chapter
Kisses :)

I really like this please. continue

Good story! Update soon! And i think Cross knows where exactly because he has hid from the Order but when he finds Allen he'll be sick or something, i dont know. :D

Can't wait to read more. Not sure what your looking for suggestions on; what do you mean by "for Cross' Allen"? Do you mean ideas for his behavior or things he does? I wouldn't mind brain storming with you to help you get ideas. Like they say two heads are better than one. And sometimes it only takes another outlook to get a world of ideas flowing.