this is so sweet

Beautiful! Wonderfully written, I especially loved John's thought process. Very funny! You did a good job of keeping the characters true and expressing their emotions. Very well done.

Awwwwwww. Very nice.

Sweetness; this story. Odd, in places, like the episode, but worth it!

3 Drunk John 3
And don't think I didn't see that Mystrade in there!

Aw! How GOOD was that!?
Very good, I tell you, very good.

Both funny and sweet - just like the actual episode itself.

'Thirteenth colour of the alphabet' - hilarious, really :D Really good take on drunk John's mind, makes for an interesting piece :)

I love this! John's thoughts were amazingly well written -as was the rest of this story, for that matter. Great idea.

This was too cute, and also funny. Thanks for posting this, as I am obsessing over season 3 X3

I loved it! It was cute and ended at the right moment. Thank you!