| Reviews for Wake up Daddy |
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Star chapter 6 . 2/18 I thought this was really cute! There's just something about Naru becoming a parent to Sasuke's children from another that gets me. My poor baby Tetsuya! I just wanted to hug him! I also didn't see Sakura being killed off coming so good twist... I'm going to apologise now for this criticism because I know people pointing out language errors can be embarrassing. But you used 'hardly' incorrectly, that's not how the adverb is used. "Sasuke was slapped Hard" is what you'd say. You use hardly in this way:" It's hardly a problem" or " I can hardly wait!." But besides that kudos and I hope this was helpfull |
Nalu and Anime for life chapter 6 . 11/5/2019 You should make a sequel where Naruto gets pregnant. |
sherryfanfic1999 chapter 6 . 4/23/2019 OMG! I thought the part about the rabbits couldn't be topped, BUT you proved me wrong with that last part. Damn Fugaku looked like an ASS! Wait, he is an ass. To bad it didn't last long. He seems like the type of father to keep trying though. I would NOT be surprised if he tried several more dinners this way. Sasuke and Naruto should have broke out laughing at the table. Ask the girl if she was ok with both fucking her in the ass and/or being the mistress. That would have had the father grabbing his daughter by the arm and dragging her out the door before it fully opened! Love it. Cute. Thanks for the reads. |
sherryfanfic1999 chapter 5 . 4/23/2019 I don't want to seem insensitive, but I find it better for Sakura this way. The girl was suffering some mad mental illness. Fugaku was not going to give Tetsuya to Naruto either if Sasuke had stayed in a coma for much longer either. Glad things worked out though. I am most surprised though that Sasuke didn't tell Fugaku to merry Sakura himself if he wanted to make more Uchihas! He could have claimed they were Sasuke's children. That's some desperation there. I really did enjoy reading your fic...AGAIN! It was better this time around. Lot more understanding. Time has pasted though, and now you can rewrite it and change it by adding to it and making it longer. I would love to read that if it happens. |
sgriffin730 chapter 6 . 4/11/2019 this was great |
Angelflowers27 chapter 6 . 3/24/2019 lovely story, lovely plot, lovely everything! *smooch* |
Flower573 chapter 6 . 1/13/2019 This is so sweet! I love this concept so much |
temarichanx chapter 6 . 7/10/2018 Aww this was such an beautiful story,LOVESS! |
THEPERSONWHOLOVESTAGYOUREIT MM chapter 6 . 6/2/2018 SO FANTASTIC |
THEPERSONWHOLOVESTAGYOUREIT MM chapter 5 . 6/1/2018 WONDERFUL |
THEPERSONWHOLOVESTAGYOUREIT MM chapter 4 . 6/1/2018 GET RID OF SAKURA AND FUGAKU NOW |
THEPERSONWHOLOVESTAGYOUREIT MM chapter 3 . 6/1/2018 FIX IT PLEASE |
THEPERSONWHOLOVESTAGYOUREIT MM chapter 2 . 6/1/2018 U LOVE IT |
THEPERSONWHOLOVESTAGYOUREIT MM chapter 1 . 6/1/2018 LOVELY |
KURAMAX chapter 6 . 5/30/2018 I'm speechless...T_T |