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Hetabee chapter 1 . 2/9/2018 While I didn’t know people shipped them (sometimes it’s easy to mistake them for each other until you think over Furi being the chihuahua and Fukada the kitten with his little Belgium grin), I can see how they’d be a thought. I like that you cut it into little vignettes that seemed like short bursts of time moving forward. Content-wise, their interactions weren’t wooden and the dialogue was well-written. Now, on the note of suggestions for improvements... Perhaps, spacing certain sentences apart so the reader isn’t initially confronted with what can appear to be a block of text before the hook is sunk into us. Also, the parentheses for Fukada’s actions feel out of place when they could be left without separation and stay a part of the reader’s visualization process for the images you’re trying to convey. |
yaaan93 chapter 1 . 3/25/2014 This was so lovely, and I have so much love for this fic. You conveyed Fukuda's feelings really well, especially with the description of him getting drawn more and more to Furi's allure. I could almost feel his antsiness. Thank you for writing this pair :) |
absolut pi phi chapter 1 . 1/8/2014 Hehe, Fukuda is head over heels in love... It's so cute. When i saw the pairing first, I was already thinking this is going to be an awesome couple. Freshmen trio has a great dynamic in their own. And i think Fukuda and Furi would look great together. It was so sweet; i loved it Richer. :3 |
Vanny chapter 1 . 1/7/2014 Sorry, I mean Fukuda/Furihata. I've been reading HaiMomo and I typed wrong. |
kendeadacct chapter 1 . 1/7/2014 Oh my God, that was the most adorable thing I've ever read. I want to print this fic out and draw little hearts around it. Furihata is the cutest thing in the world and I've only realized now that there's an actual Fukuda-centric fic in existence. My dreams have come true. Thank you so much for sharing! |
AspergianStoryteller chapter 1 . 1/7/2014 Cute. You know, this is the first story I've seen with this pairing. |
KazukeKennyHyHy chapter 1 . 1/6/2014 Did you just...? OMG Step it's wonderful and it renders me speechless. it's my first time reading haimomo and you successfully made me thinking that they're so cute ugh ;;; THIS WAS WONDERFUL AND VANNY IS JUMPING! The first years cutie is so so adorable. |
MizunashiFuyuko chapter 1 . 1/6/2014 This is why I love you so MUCH, Stepha-neeyan. XD Finally! Something dedicated to the adorable first years. X3 Dem firsties need some LOVE. X3 Thank you for this fluffy piece of work, Nee-yan! Good luck with life! XD |