Hey, I'm a college graduate so I've had quite a bit of experience looking over papers and correcting them. I enjoy exploiting plot holes from stories to make things work out for a fanfiction tale. However I really do not like when people completely disregard the original material to make their story work the way they want. (Ex. Pretending a character or event never existed). Honestly I don't like it when people overload on the original characters, one or two is fine but don't just take one character from a movie or series and twenty of your own to make a story.

Anyways, as a beta reader I would be as dedicated as possible, but obviously work would take precedence over any reading. I'm very willing to address certain aspects of your story, or just look at a chapter as a whole.

I'm really good at reworking sentences that don't make sense, and picking up on discontinuities in a story (either in the story itself or from the original work).

Sometimes my constructive criticism comes off as a bit rough, and I do tend to obsess about certain points sometime and forget others. Also I am pretty horrible at comma and semi colon use, sorry!

Disney stuff (Especially lion king), cartoons, and any anime I have seen before. Pretty much anything, any style, just ask.

I don't want to read just dialog stories please, I like to SEE what is happening.

Cartoon As Told By Ginger Cartoon Avatar: Last Airbender Movie Balto Cartoon Care Bears

Anime Dragon Ball Z Anime Gundam Wing/AC Movie Land Before Time Movie Lion King

Game Pokémon Anime Ronin Warriors Cartoon Rugrats/All Grown Up! Anime Sailor Moon

Book Song of the Lioness Book Warriors Anime Wolf's Rain Anime Zoids

General Romance Humor Drama Poetry

Adventure Mystery Parody Angst Supernatural

Suspense Sci-Fi Fantasy Tragedy Family

Hurt/Comfort Friendship