I love reading and writing reviews to stories. I always finish the stoires I start, and once I finish I write a review and I also add the review to a PM and I add more personal info. I try not to be rude, but if I don't like your story I will write that in the nicest way possible. Normally I love all stories, and I catch the littlest mistakes. And it's easy to catch them if I'm into the story.

I have critiqued many stoires in my life. (As in many stoires, my friends at school, my reviews for the stories on fanfic, and fanpress.) Normally when I read I have a clean start and read about you and what you like to write and how you like writing. It helps me get into what you were thinking as well, as understanding on how you write. SO that way I can see your perspective on how you like to write stories. I also read when nothings going on, and I look for all the points. Like spelling, grammer, (althoe I'm not best at it myself in my stories) technique, and how well your story is written. I absord the story and try to understand where your comming from as well. I also give out very detailed reviews back to you, from what I read to how it was put into the story, I almost review each chapter. (Believe me, I would if I could!) And I also read any author's notes and their ideas too. It helps me understand where you got your information from and your inspiration.

Althoe my reviews may be long, I always write a good review. It's detailed and I give back plenty of information on what I liked about your story and what I didn't. And also how you can grow as an author.

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punctuation problems

catching poor transitions

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Keeping track of the setting (knowing where the story is held)

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and more like that. . .

really gorey kinda stories. . . like monsters and blood, and horror. PM me and ask about it if your not sure!

Book Alice in Wonderland Movie Aquamarine Book Chronicles of Nick Book Chronicles of Vladimir Tod

Tv Glee Book Halo, Alexandra Adornetto Book Hunger Games Book Legend, Marie Lu

Book Monster High Book Oliver Twist Book Peter Pan Movie Peter Pan

Movie Pitch Perfect Movie Princess Bride Movie Rise of the Guardians

General Romance Humor Drama

Poetry Adventure Mystery Parody

Sci-Fi Fantasy Crime Family

Hurt/Comfort Friendship