Moon13Dreams 's Beta Reader Profile
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since: 11-17-12, id: 4366399
Author has written 5 stories | Legend of Zelda, Pokémon, Undertale, and Rise of the Guardians.
β : Moon13Dreams is a registered beta reader and is currently accepting beta reading requests.
Beta Description
Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
I would like to assist in finding a balance in other's stories and help to bounce potential ideas when unsure of what to do. I have recently started writing again and I my favorite thing to do right now is make characters/situations more relatable, believable, and realistic. As fun as it is to fuel stories with guilty pleasures of fantastical adventures, I think the best stories have a solid foundation for how the world of the story works.

I also like to assist with increasing the descriptive passages of writings. However, I only want go as in depth as someone is comfortable with, so if you don't want me to touch something, you have my word you won't. I could instead provide just feedback if you wish.

I can either completely rewrite a section of your work to give a different perspective on how I would write it or just provide feedback on what improvements can be made as well as things I really enjoy about your writing. Whatever assistance you're looking for, I would love to have a discussion about it to know just what you're needing.

My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
I have the most experience writing from a first person perspective as a female as well as some experience with a third person perspective. I also like to focus on making a character relatable, bringing their weaknesses to light just as much as their strengths.
My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
First person writing from a male perspective. Though I have been trying to work on it, it's something that could still use some work.

Overly expressive character reactions (such as characters responding with their eyes). In professional writing, it's better to use "said" more often than not and I am still learning how to efficiently do that in my own writing.

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I also I have always been bad at spelling, though I do try to catch all of my mistakes.

Preferred: types of stories I prefer over others
I'm open to almost everything. I don't discriminate.

I'll list what I've previously written myself if it helps anything (published and not published on ff): 3 Legend of Zelda, 2 Super Smash Bros., 4 Pokemon, 5 Naruto, 2 Rise of the Guardians, 1 Undertale, 1 Stardew Valley

Would Rather Not: I do not beta for these stories
I'd rather not beta dirty yuri stories only because I don't have any experience reading or writing them.

Fandoms that I have no understanding or exposure to. Out of respect for your writing, I don't want to waste your time with someone who doesn't understand the characters or the world the story takes place in. I'm willing to be a impartial party for feedback, but I won't be able to provide in-depth feedback.

Beta Preferences
Language: English
Content Rating: Fiction K » M
Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
Game Legend of Zelda
Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for
General
Romance
Humor
Drama
Adventure
Mystery
Horror
Parody
Angst
Supernatural
Suspense
Sci-Fi
Fantasy
Spiritual
Tragedy
Western
Crime
Family
Hurt/Comfort
Friendship