Hello all!

I'm one of those guys that stalks around reading a variety of stories. Silently reading over, but making a mental note of, any errors I see. I'm hoping that being a beta reader I can help writers correct most of these mistakes and in turn, gain motivation to write any of the stories that swim around my head.

Thanks for reading,

-l3largus

p.s. Feel free to check out my profile if you want more info on me. Also, here's a muffin.

I personally think that I excel at action scenes and consistency. It ruins a story for me if it diverges from it beginning plot points or if characters are OOC without (good) reason. Action scenes are easy for me because they are fast paced and focused on as few things as possible.

Romance. I have tried it a few time, it was bad; in fiction and real life. I unfortunately can't help you there... but I will gush if your romantic piece is adorable! *ahem*

Another weakness of mine is lengthy descriptions. I have not found a way to write them without it feeling as if it were dragging along.

Beginning/Endings are problems I have as well for the same reason as above.

I would prefer to beta stories about action, suspense, some fluff from time to time, and isn't a giant cliché.

I do not enjoy large quantities of fluff in my tea. I will also pass on the lumps of yaoi and yuri please.

Game BlazBlue Anime Code Geass Anime Digimon Anime Dragon Ball Z Game Elsword

Game Mario Game Melty Blood Game Mortal Kombat Game Persona Series Game Resident Evil

Anime RWBY Game Skullgirls Game Sonic the Hedgehog Game Soul Calibur Game Tales of Graces

Game Tales of Xillia Game Tekken Anime Tsukihime

Humor Drama Adventure Mystery

Horror Parody Angst Supernatural

Suspense Sci-Fi Fantasy Family

Hurt/Comfort Friendship