I am a hobbyist writer based in England. I've developed my skills through online writing and critiquing communities over a number of years. While betareading I will look at plot, characterisation, dialogue and writing style. I will point out strengths and weaknesses as I see them, give my reasoning behind them, and provide examples. If I see the same error appearing several times throughout a chapter, I will say so, but will give only one example. You will know where to find the rest! I tend not to suggest 'better alternatives' because at the end of the day it is your work, and it is up to you to decide whether something should be changed. But if you need further help I'll be happy to assist. I will not go through every line correcting spelling, grammar and punctuation - this should have been done already! However if I see the occasional typo I will point it out.

I am thorough when I review someone's work. I am strong on layout, plot and dialogue. I always offer constructive criticism.

Occasionally I may not be able to offer anything useful at all. This may have nothing to do with your work, it is just the critiquer's version of writer's block. If that happens with your submission, then I'll send a PM asking if there is anything specific you want me to look at.

I am happy to betaread most types of stories.

High school settings make me yawn. Nothing personal!

Game Luigi's Mansion

Game Mario

General Romance Humor Drama Adventure

Mystery Horror Parody Angst Supernatural

Suspense Sci-Fi Fantasy Spiritual Tragedy

Crime Family Hurt/Comfort Friendship