Tari J. Deitrich 's Beta Reader Profile |
Author has written 15 stories | Cyberchase, Pokémon, Neopets, Legend of Korra, Naruto, A-Team, Big Bang Theory, Sword Art Online/ソードアート・オンライン, Assassin's Creed, and Pathfinder RPG. |
β : Tari J. Deitrich is a registered beta reader and is currently accepting beta reading requests.
Beta Description
Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
-I've beta-read for Authors: Rilla Mortis, Daisyfan, and Kawaii Stella. The categories I've beta'ed: NCIS and Cyberchase /br /br / br /br / br / -I'm a little on the weird side. Either I don't like what I'm reading or I do like what I'm reading. I will warn you, it may take me a day or so to actually finish critiquing what I'm reading. I work part-time at a convenience store so if you send me an article, you probably won't get it back until the next /br / br / br /br / br / -I run on a strict first-come-first-serve basis. If your article comes in first, that will be the first article I will read and I will try to get it back to you as soon as I'm finished. |
My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
Like I've said before, I'm not all that great at being critical so I will try. My strengths would be something along the lines of tv shows (primarily the ones I've seen, if it's not on the list of things I like or have seen or have written about, don't send it to me). I'm also good at spotting spelling errors, grammar mistakes, and punctuation. When I beta, I try to get a feel as to what the writer is trying to express. If something doesn't sound right, I'll change it. But I don't do anything with storylines. Changing that is up to the writer. Even as a beta, it's not my place to fool with a storyline. It also helps if i know something about what your writing about. like if it's a show or something like that, i at least have to know what it's about to get a feel for what you're trying to convey. it helps me figure out if your characters are in . . . well . . . character. if you wanted to change their personality a bit to fit your story, that's fine. i might critique you on that so you might want to warn me ahead of time if you've changed how a character acts so i know not to play with that. |
My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
I don't do games or plays. That's not really my strong suit. They tend to lose me or my brain goes elsewhere. Also, when someone says, "tell me if my story is missing something or if I forgot something", I don't know if there's something you forgot to include. I will do what I can to make your manuscript better. You can take a look at it and decide if there needs to be something added and maybe send it back to me. my job is just to help you fix it if you want it to be fixed. |
Preferred: types of stories I prefer over others
(See my preferences below) |
Would Rather Not: I do not beta for these stories
preferrably not games or plays. and absolutely no family guy or simpsons. |
Beta Preferences
Language: English |
Content Rating: Fiction K » M |
Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
Cartoon Avatar: Last Airbender Tv Charmed Cartoon Cyberchase Misc Digimon/Pokemon Tv Doctor Who
| Anime Fullmetal Alchemist Cartoon Huntik: Secrets & Seekers Cartoon Legend of Korra Cartoon Lilo & Stitch Anime Naruto
| Tv NCIS Tv New Tricks Cartoon South Park Movie Star Wars Tv StarTrek: Deep Space Nine
| Tv StarTrek: Enterprise Tv StarTrek: The Next Generation Tv StarTrek: Voyager
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Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for
General Humor Adventure Mystery
| Angst Supernatural Suspense Sci-Fi
| Fantasy Tragedy Crime Family
| Hurt/Comfort Friendship
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