My style is a two layer situation. First I will read through your work, picking out things that don't flow well or confuse readers, obvious misspellings and where you may need a new /

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Secondly, I'll go through paragraph by paragraph, checking each sentence for misspellings, wrong uses of contractions, pointing out the their/they're/there, and other things like that.

My strength is how to elongate stories, how to make them sound professional. In my fan-fiction, I usually don't do this, because otherwise I'd get a chapter up a month. But if you'd like to sound more professional, here's an example of my /

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A blackness engulfs them after every bolt, the thunder crackles behind them. The wind comes on and blows the rain as spikes onto their impermeable faces, they ignore it. In front stands the tallest, the broadest and the mightiest of their party, a man named Idaina. He looks quickly for movement. He opens somber lips. “Back to the camp.”

Picking up spellings when I'm reading through it fast, except Harry Potter, they had a bunch of misprints in Deathly Hallows... Anyway, if I feel I didn't get enough to satisfy you, I will recommend you to another beta reader.

I can do any stories, just do ask me to do character development for anything other then Naruto, Sailor Moon or Bleach. If your character is original, I can help with that, however.

Things that are not my cup of tea is basically limited to nothing. If you message me your plot I'll just tell you if I'm comfortable with it.

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