I am fairly new to the Beta-Thing but am completely ready to take this on. I am not afraid to tell you what you need to fix, but promise to do it in the nicest way I can. I understand that everyone wants to have an amazing Hero or Heroine, and thus am tolerant of Mary Sues. I will try to help you find the balance between a good OC and a bad Mary Sue.

My strongest point is makeing a story flow and sound/look good to a reader. I am also good with words; I can give you synonyms,idioms, the works to make your work less repetitive and mundane. Grammar is also one of my better points.

Over useage of commas. I use them like a madwoman. I also tend to be a bit wordy and take a while to get to the point sometimes. I am also a hopeless romantic and despise sad stories.

C.S Lewis, Eragon, Lord of the Rings, Tamora Pierce, Twilight, Pirates of the Carribea...I will beta jusrt about anything if it has a decent plot line

Anime, manga, cartoons...yeah, not really my thing but I can try...

Book Chronicles of Narnia

General Romance Humor

Drama Poetry Adventure

Mystery Parody Suspense

Fantasy Western Friendship