| Sarah Alisa Perne 's Beta Reader Profile |
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Author has written 1 story | Harry Potter. |
β : Sarah Alisa Perne is a registered beta reader and is currently accepting beta reading requests.
Beta Description
Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
As a beta-reader, I will expect to be improving anything that you submit to me. I am very passionate about writing so when I edit a piece I'll be looking at characterization and plot automatically while keeping in mind sentence beginning variation(not using I, I, I for every beginning in a sentence-redundant), transitions(Additionally, However, In conclusion, Moreover), and syntax(how everything is put together overall). Particularly, I am super strict about sentence fluency, dialogue punctuation, transitions, word choice(am I going to walk or am I going to scramble, stalk, flail, climb my way somewhere?), and most of all the creative/imagination aspect of any story. The types of things I normally ask myself when editing another persons work goes a little bit like this:br /br /br /br /br /br /br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / What does the writer want to convey?br /br /br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / How can I make it better?br /br /br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / Does it make sense?br /br /br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / Do I feel the emotions that the characters feel?br /br /br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / Does the dialogue seem to flow and be realistic without extra fluff?br /br /br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / Do I want to read more?br /br /br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br / br / br /br / br / br /br /br /br / br / br /br / br |
My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
Punctuation(of dialogue), imagination, poetry:rhyming, poetry:meter, word choice, grammar, transitions, sentence beginning variation, sentence fluency,spelling, syntax, organization, details, imagery. |
My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
Can be very strict about spelling, transitions, word choice, and how everything flows. Manga/Anime type pieces aren't my best area but I could always help if you need someone impartial. |
Preferred: types of stories I prefer over others
Harry Potter, Any type of fiction. |
Would Rather Not: I do not beta for these stories
Nothing. Throw it at me. |
Beta Preferences
| Language: English |
| Content Rating: Fiction K » M |
Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
Book Child Thief
Book Ella Enchanted
| Book Harry Potter
Book Molly Moon series
| Book Series Of Unfortunate Events
Book Vampire Academy
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Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for
General
Romance
Humor
Drama
| Poetry
Adventure
Mystery
Horror
| Parody
Angst
Supernatural
Suspense
| Fantasy
Tragedy
Hurt/Comfort
Friendship
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