Fullsteel 's Beta Reader Profile
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since: 03-25-06, id: 1014756
Author has written 9 stories | Bleach, Final Fantasy VII, Kingdom Hearts, and Torchwood.
β : Fullsteel is a registered beta reader and is currently accepting beta reading requests.
Beta Description
Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
First of all I want to mention that I'm from Sweden, so my English is obviously not 100% /br /

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When I beta-read I first and foremost try to keep an eye out for spelling- and grammar errors since I know how easy it is for an author to slip up at /br /

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I also make sure to point out if I don't think there's a good flow in the story (bad structure, choppy, too much dialog and things like that).br /br /

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I try to analyse your way of portraying the characters as well, so I can tell you if I think they're being too out of character (unless you actually want them to be OOC).

My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
My main strength is probably spotting problems with the flow of the story. I'll tell you if I think the story is being too choppy, if your sentence structure can be better and other things that affect the flow of your story. It is important that the reader feel that it's not too difficult to /br /

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I also pick up in spelling and grammar errors quite easily, even though I'm Swedish.

My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
I guess that must be that English isn't my first /br /

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I've been learning English since 1998 so I'm quite good. But there's a risk that I wont spot all grammatical errors.

Preferred: types of stories I prefer over others
I can beta pretty much anything. br /br /

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But I do prefer shounen ai/yaoi. Perhaps yuri as /br /

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Angst, horror, romance, hurt/comfort, drama and such genres are something I like a bit more than others. I do also have a huge love for stories that actually mess with your head, to use psychology in a story is really nice.

Would Rather Not: I do not beta for these stories
Shota, /br /

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Also not too fond of stories revolving around straight pairings. I might consider it depending on what pairing it is.

Beta Preferences
Language: English & Swedish
Content Rating: Fiction K » M
Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
Anime Bleach
Game Final Fantasy VII
Anime Fullmetal Alchemist
Game Kingdom Hearts
Anime Naruto
Game Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney
Tv Torchwood
Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for
General
Romance
Humor
Drama
Adventure
Mystery
Horror
Angst
Suspense
Fantasy
Tragedy
Crime
Hurt/Comfort
Friendship