I'm going to do my best on getting the fixed chapter up in the next couple of days. But I FUCKED up. I realized after I posted and I've been stuck since. This is the first chance that I've had to work on fixing it (for personal reasons). I did something I hadn't meant to do yet. Too soon, too soon. Ugh fuck. Anyways. I'm rewriting the chapter. I should also apologize for the long hiatus. I'm not making any promises on anything anymore.