| Reviews for He's Not Dead Yet |
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   marvinkitfox1 chapter 31 . 7/24 Well, it WAS a nice story. Quirky, off-beat, and smelling faintly of Monty Python. but somewhere around chapter 25 or so, it just got silly. And now, even the sillyness has drained away, leaving just a bit of a mess and a ring around the bathtub. |
| Jimbocous chapter 34 . 7/22 Thanks for a great read! |
| firedamio chapter 34 . 7/20 This began as a excellent story with adequate quirk of the writer. But few chapters towards the end were like Luna Lovegood times 100. So unreadable or so out of plot that I lost interest. If you write a story please keep the tone same. It gave me a headache |
| shadewolfedrt chapter 10 . 7/10 Monty Python and their style of humor works best I have seen for Harry Potter stories. |
| love4HP chapter 1 . 7/10 On the first chapter, was loving it until the 6wives thing came along. Really! As it is polygamy is pukeworthy, hypocritical. Not to forget it doesn't involve true love, only needs. On top of that it's idiotic too! If each line required a different wife, why the hell Harry's ancestors including father had one wife only? |
| Bjalf chapter 4 . 7/10 Thank you, thank you, thank you for writing a short and concise shopping trip, without a detailed listing of every single clothing item and in which colours, and whether he wanted boxers or briefs, and which side he "dressed". |
| Demigod4996 chapter 23 . 7/8 Besides being a 6th year, are we sure the female Auror isn't Angelina Johnson |
| Demigod4996 chapter 15 . 7/8 You are the first author whom I've read that talk about Cedric becoming Edward |
| Demigod4996 chapter 14 . 7/8 Harry, I hadn't read up ok U.K laws but attempting to kill you isn't just a violation of the restraining order but Attempted Murder |
| Demigod4996 chapter 11 . 7/7 Cedrella, are you sure it was Fred? |
| Zannna chapter 34 . 7/6 Lovely! |
| Black Swords Man32 chapter 34 . 7/2 I really hope to see the sequel. Great story. |
| Someone chapter 10 . 7/1 Ch,10 Nobody expects the Spanish Inquisition |
| Guest chapter 34 . 7/1 The humor at points felt like the author was trying to hard. Maybe I just wasn’t in the right frame of mind. The story came across as somewhat serious overall with many moments of over the top crack that pulled me out of the story. This made it somewhat hard to enjoy. Wasn’t sure if it was a crack with too many serious points or a legit story with too much over the top humor. It suffered I think for the whiplash it caused. |
| Traveler301 chapter 8 . 7/1 That has to be one of the funniest o-makes I've ever read. Puts Orion Black in a whole new light. You've done a wonderful job with this story. It's no wonder to me that I was smart enough to fav-follow you as one of my favorite authors. Needless to say "Monty Python", was one of my favorite shows in the late sixties/and seventies, yeah, I'm old. 77 my last birthday. " He's Not Dead Yet" is a real HOOT! Thanks for writing it for me, Ron Pate Traveler301 |
