the stupidest story I've ever read. oh he's very handsome and I'm in love with him. bulshit

EDGELORD DETECTED! EJECT! EJECT!

edge.
LOOOOORDD!

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Your fic sucks ass. Give up, also those Author Notes are cringe as fuck

Please bring it back

Do you think you could make a fic of naruto being with bagi the monster of mighty nature?.

12 pack really? what size does naruto measure to have a 12 pack?

you probably mean 6 pack because even when looking at pictures of Naruto muscle growth, for Naruto to have a 12 pack, he must be gigantic and terribly muscular!

am I surprised that nobody noticed this error?

how did Naruto meet Rias, Lala and the others?
they make me think more of bitches in heat, running after Naruto dick and wanting to be in his pants!

Chifuyu abandoned by his parents? to my knowledge, Chifuyu has no parents! and if Chifuyu has been abandoned, where is Ichika?

Naruto is supposed to be a 'cold' but he is not 'cold' at all!
on the contrary, he is charming! he finds love far too behavior is very erratic and confusing

also I don't understand why people say this story is great, good or whatever?
because it's Naruto?
even I who love Naruto I feel horrified by this massacre!

nothing makes sense, it looks like a story written by a kid.
please stop polluting the fandom!

Guy below me stated it perfectly, are you even trying?

a 12 pack at 15 years old? wtf! OxO
even by training hard, the best he can get realistically is 4/6, 8 pack is the best he can get!
for Naruto to have 12 packs, he must measure between... 2 and 3 meters! lol

your version of Naruto is far too idealistic and unrealistic!
it makes me think of a self-insert!

the world building is of course nonexistent, the girls are added only to make Naruto harem bigger!
Hdxd? To Love-ru? so many characters is hard to follow and their presence doesn't make sense, it looks like their mission is to be only in his pants

how do the Infinite Stratos characters react to the presence of devils, fallen, angels and aliens?
can they also pilot Is? can sacred gears be considered as Is?
there is more than one guy at school, does that imply that Issei and Rito can also pilot Is?

as i said the world building is nonexistent, sacrificed for the "sake" of the harem!

without any reason or explanation because Ichika is "supposedly" the densest protagonist harem in the universe you replaced him by your ideal version of Naruto?

the people who say this story is crap are absolutely right!
I have the impression to read some male reader (self-insert) x harems on wattpad.
mass multiverse harems, mass powers, genderbenders, mass weapons, etc...
all in one world!
your story is the same kind of crap.

you should learn to write a real crossover, not insert your own perverted fantasies!
this story deserves a heavy rewrite and a refocusing only on Infinite stratos universe.

definitely one of the worst and more disgusting crossovers here.

Welcome back please continue

Joder

Never heard of a Dimension Wraith, but it sounds annoying as hell and yet an interesting idea. Like, it sounds like something that "keeps the balance" between dimensions or some stupid shit like that to prevent dimensional hoppers. I mean, I very much prefer a Council of Ricks to do the Dimensional Balance bullshit excuse but Wraiths work pretty well since they can be annoying as hell.

Anyway, keep on continueing and updating your stories along with ignoring those who flame and criticize you too much.

Glad to see you ok since it has been a couple of months since your last update. Plus this chapter is really interesting and I like the idea of Dimension Wraiths keeping everything as canon. Bye for now and hope the next chapter for any of your stories will be PLUS ULTRA.

This was a great chapter it's been quite awhile sense you posted anything I'm glad to see your back I enjoy reading your stories