All of your stories are beautiful! You need to came back with a new Frary story because you are very talented and it seems you are meant to write about them!

So beautiful! *w* I loved this story~ Their love is so precious.

Thank you for writing.

You can't see it, but I'm doing my "Clarissa Dance". I love Clarissa! I also love that You spent some time exploring the "pull" Francis feels. I love that you have him take the time to think about Mary's question.

Ugh...This is just lovely. I'm just in awe of you. Perfection.

OMG YES FINALLY FRARY SHIPPER! everyone ships mash but francis is wayyy hotter. I love this fanfic! Please do more:)

Love this!

I love this! As you said, we had some similar ideas and then ran with them in different directions. But I really love your take on Francis' side after Ep103 (could almost be paired with my 1st chapter from Mary's POV), and you describe his internal struggle and feelings for Mary so eloquently and perfectly. I hope you write more Reign fic!

Heyyy...how'd I miss this? Well-written (nice to not be turned off by errors/typos - oh, I'm such a snob!), and I like how you played with the different connotations of "just a girl". Francis' last thought was a very sweet and satisfying ending (although I hope you'll keep continue writing...sequel?) Now, what's this about you writing Roswell fanfic too? I peeked at your profile. :) Where can I read *that* please? Roswell captured my heart in season one and stomped on it in season two. But we always have fanfiction to fix things! I'd really like to read more of your stuff.

Thanks to everyone for your kind words! I've been overwhelmed by the response to this.

We'll see where the show goes from here, but there's a good likelihood that something will beg to be written after the episode airs in the United States tonight. No guarantees, but you never know! :)

This was fantastic, I really hope they have Francis going through the passage way to Mary's room in the show (we can only dream) so thank you for writing this. I think you should continue instead of being a one shot.

Well, this was a magnificent piece, I loved it. And I'd love it if you did write more of these two, but even if you don't, thanks for sharing anyway! :)

thanks to u i realized i like francis better than bash :)

This was a very interesting piece of fiction!
Your portrayal of the characters is just as I had envisionned in my mind, and the tension between Francis and Mary is absolutely delicious!
I sincerely hope you will continue writing for the Reign fandom as I fathom we would all greatly appreciate your work.

This was lovely and very realistic. Hope you'll write more about them :)

such a good story!