| Reviews for Bummed |
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typroctor-ewaguy chapter 1 . 6/28/2019 This was funny. I hadn't realized you could write comedy Lu. Nobody can do homeless like Marty Deeks, they shouldn't even try. He was robbed and he has to pay for his phone, I doubt it. |
Princess of Imagination chapter 1 . 6/8/2014 Awesome one shot! Loved it! |
Tabitha chapter 1 . 12/30/2013 Please do a sequeal to this! |
EmmyLou74 chapter 1 . 10/27/2013 Ha ha I actually read this in Decidedly Deeks! So funny :) |
thepixiesmademedoit chapter 1 . 10/27/2013 Great story! Any chance you might add on an additional chapter? I'd love to see your take on this particular 'fashion' show! |
imahistorian chapter 1 . 10/26/2013 Very fun little story and I love how you included the team. And nice that Hetty is going to let Deeks decide who gets to continue the undercover mission! |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/22/2013 Awesome. Please continue. |
anonkp chapter 1 . 10/23/2013 Excellent as always. I loved the turn-about as Deeks is handed some authority over Sam and Callen, and gets to make them miserable for a change. Very enjoyable to see that. And I agree with the other reviewers who've pointed out how it would do Sam and Callen some good to try to go undercover as homeless men. They always undervalue Deeks' abilities and contributions and this might give them a new perspective. And we'll miss your interviews & reviews, Philly Di, but I hope that means we'll get more original stories. |
ananova chapter 1 . 10/23/2013 Oh this is hilarious, thank you so much for sharing. Callen and Sam like to tease Deeks about going undercover as a bum now they'll have their own turn. Please, continue this, I want to see which one Deeks picks and what happens to them when they try to go undercover. Bet they get made as not really being homeless. |
PT21 chapter 1 . 10/23/2013 LOL cute. Thanks for the nice images you've left me with :) |
Dherea chapter 1 . 10/22/2013 This is an awesome short. It shows that thought, work, skill and dedication all go into an undercover op. Not to mention, it shows Deek's compassion. Great story! |
justdreaming-83 chapter 1 . 10/22/2013 Cute story, "Lu." I could just see Deeks' wounded affect change to something akin to delight. He WOULD get a kick out of smelling up the dainty smelling Hardy Boys. |
ncislaaddict123 chapter 1 . 10/22/2013 hey sweety ;0) this was so fun to read :0) Deeks the ever one who want to help if Human or Animal ;0) ha and i love the way Sam and Callen all got there shit back when they realize that they eventually go in under as a homeless guy ;0) ha and Hetty ... without words just Perfect ;0) nicely written ;0) love it as always ;0) please can you write one more chap ? i really wanna know who's goin under ?! pleaaaaaaassssseeeeee ;0) xoxox kerstin ;0) |
blue dogs rock chapter 1 . 10/22/2013 callen perfect canditate! why shouldn't deeks have some fun sometimes! |
Bard15 chapter 1 . 10/22/2013 really...come on...this would make a great short story...put callen & sam out there doing the down and dirty undercover...let them muddle through and screw it up and have to rely on deeks expertise for a change ! (whine) More ! |