Nice bit of writing. Malfoy over Ron? that is a no brainer to everykne but JKR

Gut wrenching, beautiful and well written. Fantastic job, well done!

I found this wholesome

Fleur is the only likable character in this story. Harry is a coward for always choosing the easy way out (trying to commit suicide, not confronting Fleur after the war), Hermione is a complete bitch with the way she interact to Fleur, it doesn't surprise me she ended up with Malfoy here. And let's not forget about Fleur's father and Bill who thought it was a good idea to force her to marry.

Really cool, thanks for that. Sad ending would have been more realistic, but you've got a point saying that over here we can please ourselves with "happily ever after", because it's rare in reality

Wow nice twist at the end
I think this is the first fic where a main character loses their magic I've come across. It makes the story stand out. I like it.

Also I want to complemint how you write sentences. They are easy to read yet not simple.

Really sweet story.

Poignant and sweet. Yes, it would be very much like Harry to push Fleur away when he realized he was a Horcrux. I'm very glad Hermione straightened things out. The flashbacks you gave when Fleur was making up her mind were cool too. And though it's tragic, her giving up her magic does mirror him giving up his life. Very sweet romance between them. You got quite a bit of depth into it, for a one-shot.

Also, I don't in the least mind Draco being Hermione's boyfriend. I don't really read Draco/Hermione, but I can quite stand it in the background of this. Redeemed Draco can be fun to read.

Overall, quite sweet and enjoyable, though I wish they had waited for the wedding. Good concluding lines too.

If it wasn't for Draco/Hermione, this one-shot would be perfect.

Only thing I dislike about this fic is Draco/Hermione. Everything else was perfect.

A wonderfully written bittersweet story that leans more to the sweet side. With that compliment out of the way, both Harry and Fleur are cowards. When Harry foolishly pushed Fleur away, she should have slapped (literally!) some much needed sense into him. Fleur is a grown ass woman who can make her decisions; how dare Harry make such a life-altering decision for her?! She was very clear that she would rather die together with him than to live without him.

Even after the war was over, Harry could have righted his wrong by explaining his idiocy to Fleur and got back together with her. But what he do? That right, he moped around and wallowed in self-pity like a retarded little bitch ― a cowardly act that cost Fleur her magic because she still loved him and wanted to be with him. People who needlessly put barriers to their own success and happiness sicken me.

Interesting story, but MioneXDraco, just eww.

Draco? Craziness, sorry, utter madness. Likewise Snape redeemed... rubbish

The rest of the story though lots if fun and a good read, thanks for sharing

This is powerful. I have come to quite enjoy oneshot angst.

nice, good, sad and all of the above :)