Great story! I am amazed at how easy you make it seem to write such great dialogue and move a story along.

I have been looking for legit fanfic since I fell for Densi about 2 mos ago. You my friend did not disappoint. I love your stories! Thanks for sharing them. :)

Good story you never know what you will find on a road trip

I really enjoyed this story. It was fun and fast-paced, with a great balance of fast and slow. I loved the subtlety in which you explored the character dynamics - I felt it was very true to their development over the show. You explored the relationship between Kensi and Deeks well, giving it attention and movement, without being too heavy on the romance, and avoiding falling into certain tropes. Keeping the contrast of the quick, dramatic action and the slow burn of the relationship really gave this piece a unique and fresh diversity. I really enjoyed reading this - great job!

They can't go anywhere with out ending up in trouble. Nice piece, thanks for sharing.

Powerful story. Mistress of Table Manners will stay with me for a while:) Thank you.

what a great story, loved every word of it!

Love the title and the story :) Your attention to details is incredible! Hope to see some more wonderful stories from you.

Welcome back- you've been missed! Nice little story. Your precise descriptions of place, people, and actions are always a pleasure to read.

Well...
The first thing I loved about this story was the title. Smart.
And the story is... well... I can't say anything without repeating myself. Well-written, entertaining, and I like how your style makes me think with Deeks' head.

Also, I loved the little comment of Deeks: "You are my priority". This shows the true character of Deeks. I love it when fanfic writers acknowledge this.

It was a pleasure as always, thank you for sharing.

Adored the title. Adored the story. Adore your writing. It was exactly what I needed today. XD

Wow. Makes you think.

LOVE love this! Wonderful story!

So happy to see you back...I tweeted it lol!

Such a good storyteller, such a good writer. This is great! Also great is the bit of Deeks/Kensi UST sprinkled tbroughout.

Hopefully life allows you some freedom occasionally for the sole purpose of this hobby cuz we love our pokey dotes fanfics! :)

My God, you can make me laugh. Your style is so warm and funny, while at the same time so real and endlessly entertaining. I love the way you write Deeks. And you do love to almost blow him up.

Favorite line among many: " ...upgrading the situation from "oh no" to "oh fuck". "

I will always be greedy for more from you. Your stories are terrific.