Reviews for The Burglaress
Guest chapter 18 . 7/25
I love this story! I've read it & re-read it so many times. I miss your updates. Please come back
Ms. Fairweather chapter 18 . 7/10
I love this story so much and want more so badly
KnocturneWitch chapter 18 . 2/20
I love it. So cute and to the point, but still showing how mich time has passed better than most. Thank you. It's been a delightful read.
DawnScarlet19610 chapter 18 . 12/1/2019
Great story. Love it. I hope you continue one day.
DawnScarlet19610 chapter 1 . 12/1/2019
I really enjoyed this chapter and look forward to reading more. The only critique I have is using the name Bilbo for a female hobbit. Seems they're often named after flowers and things like that. Bilbo would be so embarrassing to have as a name for a girl, I think. Not very fetching. Anyways, great start!
WanderlustV chapter 18 . 11/25/2019
What a lovely chapter and such a good story! I am sorry that you haven't continued it, but I really enjoyed what you've written so far, and I've subscribed with fingers crossed. :) The alternating points of view add a lot of texture to the story and give the reader a more well-rounded sense of all of the characters, especially the dwarves. Thanks for the great read!
WanderlustV chapter 4 . 11/25/2019
I realize that you've likely left this story behind a long while ago, but I just found it and I am *really* enjoying the Bilbo/Dwalin interactions so far, as well as the inter-dwarf conversations. :)
Swardstory chapter 18 . 10/23/2019
Love this story
Guest chapter 14 . 10/21/2019
I love everyone's perspective. And Dwalin, ah Dwalin.
Guest chapter 5 . 10/20/2019
I know Thorin is disappointed, bitter, tired and hangry, but he does not need to be jerk.
Guest chapter 4 . 10/20/2019
observant. love how she keeps looking to Dwalin.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/20/2019
I like this. It always made me a bit upset that they made the dwarves seem unabservant.
Dragon of Yin and Yang chapter 18 . 9/13/2019
I’d love to see this story continued.
jilba25 chapter 6 . 4/18/2019
Course Thorin was embarrassed, but you would need to rack him to get him to admit it. Love Dwalin being protective of Bilbo, and her neighbors being concerned is sweet too.
The Company recovers their manners at the end, this fits with my theory that the Dwarves were hungry, on the road for who knows how long, they genuinely were desperate for a good meal which is why they are all Bilbo's food. And l think they played up a bit from relief; they'd all made it to the Shire, their quest is about to began and they were in a safe place, the Shire, protein by Rangers so they could relax, you bring this theory of mine in very well throughout this chapter
Angie chapter 18 . 4/17/2019
O Dwalin é muito giro
Kkkkk
Like this story very much
Por favor, write more!
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