I find myself intrigued and rather liking Amanda a lot. I really hope that this story keeps going. I love Tsubasa R. Chronicle, but the added factor of another person to influence events (potentially) always really cool.

I only just found this story today, and I was really impressed. You should really continue writing this. You've inspired me to continue the story I've started writing that's similar in set-up (OC that doesn't end up with Kurogane or Fai), but hasn't been posted, yet. I look forward to the next chapter.

Ummmm welll I actually like this story its one of the few that have an OC but even better this OC Doesn't fall in love with one of the guys (not that I have anything against that its just that its kinda repetitive) Also I like that this OC doesn't steal all the characters lines and stuff...
she's kinda unique and I like that.
Hope you update soon, no one makes anymore tsubasa fanfics anymore.

Awesome, awesome, AWESOME! Don't u dare give up, ya' hear me? This story is really good, so keep it up! You still have a long ways to go, after all! Fai forever! Caio, WyvernWizard

Although you lost your interest in this story, I think you should give it a try. You already have everything setup and only need to add your own tidbits of information. Besides, so far, Amanda seems like a very like-able character.

Onto alerts!

I loved how this chapter developed CLAMP's characters opinions of Amanda and how she changed the plot a little when helping Syaoran get the feather because a lot of characters with knowledge of the journey decide not to go against hitsuzen. I think my favourite scene was with Syaoran and Sakura. So cute! The couples seem to be developing already as well, especially with Shogo and Primera since many fics don't put much detail into non main characters (if that makes sense). It's also nice to go into description of the kudan because it makes the story seem more vivid. Love it so far anyway!

great story update siin

Excellent three chapters

Hyuu! It's really good please don't stop! I think it's good that someone is doing an OC fic without them falling in love with Fai, Kurogane etc. especially because it offers new ideas about them without love being a factor. I love that Mokona, Fai and Amanda get on well (mostly because Kurogane reacts hilariously(I have had many strange looks for bursting out laughing and I pretty much just got up!)) So pleeaaasse don't stop writing!

Hey! So I'm really digging this fanfiction! The direction you've taken it in is really groovy and I definitively can't wait to read more. What's really catching my attention is that the character has her own part of the story. So its not only a retelling of Tsubasa Chronicles. Which, while I loved the anime I don't read an exact repeat ya dig? So continuing on the story line yet having it from someone else's pov is super cool. I'd really dig it if you updated a new chapter so i can keep reading this super fly fanfiction. Oh and let me tell you that I wasn't gonna review because...while I'm a super rad person I'm also the king of laziness. And as the king it takes a lot out of me to review ya know? BUT then I happened to see your AN and you mentioned something about not being suited for the fandom. WELL! after reading that let me tell you that all of my laziness suddenly evaporated and I thought to myself 'I can't let such a rad and fly author think they aren't hip! That'd be like reading a fanfiction for an anime you've neva watched! It just can't be done.' So when you update another chapter I may not review right away - got to keep up my title as king after all - however i will be readin'. So next chapter when you don't get a review right away be chill knowin that I'm here readin the story anyway

Peace out

S.

P.S. Some super cool cat dared me to talk like a fly mamma jamma for the rest of the day...It has resulted in this speech...so don't think I'm pullin your leg it's just me flyin a kite to victory over a pretty little Dare that I MUST WIN! S. Out