Reviews for Brothers Reunion At One Piece Academy |
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![]() ![]() not being rude or anything just correcting your math *16* eyes widened* |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's 2016 already! Are you still planning tocontinue this fic? You got me really interested in your version of Luffy's past, that I have to say! Can't wait what you write next!Love the story so far! |
![]() ![]() How is he alive Then? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whitey Bay? More like Whitey BAE! ...and now I think of this story whenever someone says bae... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay. first things first: sorry about your grandmother. my grandfather passed away over a year ago while I was writing a naruto fanfic and it really messed me up. now then I didn't read the ending for this fic because I'm hoping you'll update it. I know it's been almost three years, and you've probably moved on, but do you think you'll update it? I would love to actually read it. not now even though I love your story I have to say your English needs a little work. you should try to find a beta reader. if you can't find anyone, I might be able to help you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's so touching at the same time it literally made me laughed on the floor! Well... I fell on the floor and it's Law's fault! Why the heck will he ask the "just reuniting" brothers for a freaking blood test?! And Why did he ask Marco for his blood type?! Lol! PS. Counting the freckles is fun! Did you count it too from Ace's picture? And i bet the puffing cheeks of Ace is cute. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay. I'm not usually one to flame buuuuuuuut Neko. Neko Robin. WTF. |
![]() ![]() ![]() DON'T LEAVE ME HANGING. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ARGGGHHHHH ! can't...read.. Too much bolds -.- pls redo it I cannot READ IT WITHOUT STRAINING MY EYEZZZZ TT•TT |
![]() ![]() Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel for you, i had a similar experience not so long ago. But you MUST KEEP WRITING (Dramatic voice)! ;P |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, Your ending ideas were simply phenomenal. I am so sorry to hear about all of the upheaval and loss in your life. I hope things go well for you and that maybe someday you come back to writing fanfiction. You are certainly in my prayers. Good luck with everything |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I just adored it, man you have had me hanging for a while here waiting to find out what would happen and when there reunion would happen. I am so freaking happy! Great job writing it and good description drawing out all of their thoughts :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my gosh Chuochuo bahahahahah so freaking funny. And good gosh, break my heart into pieces about Luffy, wow, really hurt my heart. But, it was a different twist, you did a great job of being creative with the backstory and I love how everyone fits together :D And TWO WEEKS! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww, I liked the dodgeball hahah and Nami is one smart chick :) |