I noticed a mistake you call the Headmistress a Headmaster where Harry mention about inviting the Dursley to the match.

One question it said Harry is a mid year transfer. Yet there were still first year to sort.

I really enjoyed your depiction of the nice Dursleys. Gave me a good feeling. Thanks.

Omg this was an amazing story I loved every second of it!

I love this story

Harry is a Black. Use family connections!

Ugh... This story is so fucking dull. The writing is ok, I guess. But everything is so predictable. And gosh quidditch is boooringggg, make up something better lmao

Loved the plot and characters, and it was weirdly satisfying that Voldie just gets brushed off like the worst villain ever he is. :) Also very amused that Delores suddenly vanished! Its all she deserves, really; I picture her sitting next to Dumbledore in the Janus Thickey ward, both trying to come up with the one person they want to curse, but lost for the name.

What actually did happen to Umbridge. We know she took over since Hagrid was fired for a short time and I am sure even though it's not mentioned he was brought back on staff when McGonagall became Headmistress.

Great chapter. I would have had Harry ask Fudge what will you say to the parents of all the 5th and 7th students who end up all getting a T on the NEWTS and OWL because there was not pratical lesson in DADA only theory. Could you pass your OWLS and NEWTS without having any practical lessons.

Personally I think Harry should have made a comment to Hermonie stating that does she truly deserve that prefects badge she has. She may have the grades for it but does she truly deserve to wear that badge.

Great story, yet the end made it seem that the Toad was no longer in charge. What happened to her. I had actually wanted to see the Toad try and give Harry a blood quill detention.

You don't get werewolf cures in many stories. I wonder what the British ministry will say when the find out. Another thing I like about Harry not being a Hogwarts student he does not have the toad as a teacher or end up in her Blood Quil detentions. One thing that I don't get is when did McG become Head Mistress and what happened to the toad.

His girlfriend should be from his new school and maybe the girl who gave him a massage a few chapters back.

So Dumbledore knows where Harry is and is going to try and bring him back to England. The Aurors are going to have to try and find a way to get him out of a country they don't have jurisdiction in to take someone away. I am surprised it is not Snape he sent after they boy.