It was all so exciting until that sobering end :"( Does this version imply that the elders knew all along what would happen? Great writing and a wonderful story you've got here though!

That last line killed me

This is absolutely magnificent! I really located it. It's not often people do aang's actually test. Just wish you did another chapter somehow linking that chapter to do with katara and sokka, but it was greatgreat, u should continue it

That was very well-written. I liked Aang's cheekiness, and especially the final few lines - so meaningful! :)

Interesting, That was very thoughtful.

One word: Awesome.

This was a nice story of how Aang earned his Master's title. I thought you showcased his abilities really well.

freaking epic. I love that last part :) You should write more Aang/Elders/Gyastso. There aren't a lot of good ones. :)

Yay! Go Aang! Nice story, thanks for sharing!

It's beautifully written. And it made me sad to think that their culture's mostly gone now.
:'/

Ineresting