I like this. Thanks.

Clever idea to start the story from the point of view of the changeling, the reader gradually understands what happened without you ever saying so directly, that's neat!

Spoooky! On many levels. One wonders how the real Sarah really did react? I can't imagine she would be pleased, but we don't know if her displeasure will register with her captor. I love pieces that make you think!

Your Goblin King is more than wicked, yet we are obsessed by him.. which is why your readers keep re-reading your stories, as I do. :)

Whoohoo! Glad to see that you're back!
I like the idea of a doppelganger switch. Surprisingly it is not a theme that is written about very much(in my labyfict. reading anyway) compared to the copious times Sarah is whisked off on a moments notice to the Underground never to return again.
Creepy and intriguing theme.

I liked it.

That was extremely original and VERY interesting.

What he did was creepy and in a way oddly sweet.