Reviews for Slytherins Secret
Ann Jinn chapter 18 . 7/23
This is a really well thought out story. I like how you are writing the characters, especially Hermione, Neville and Hagrid. Harry and Pomphry are a great team. It does explain why Harry was never treated.
Ptolemys pyjamas chapter 13 . 7/18
You said Dumbledore wasn't evil but his actions seem pretty evil in this chapter.
Guest chapter 13 . 6/29
Wow you really made Hermione a despicable person didn’t you. No reason either unless you just hate her. I would say she isn’t that naive but sadly she really could be at that age.
Although having health professionals as parents who are trained to see possible abuse, she has slightly less excuse to be this gullible. Her canon devotion to authority and disbelief in their ability to do wrong does make this mindset easily believable. Hermione only ever had adults on her side and kids against her. Harry has never had anyone in his side and direct experience with adults who will choose to allow his torment to continue rather than help. Shame, I normally like Hermione but your version is detestable.
anjiepotter chapter 18 . 6/20
i hope to read more
Alexander chapter 18 . 5/29
I was like, 'Oh, shoot, they're treating him better than my mom treats me.'
Esmereilda chapter 18 . 5/6
he just undercut all of dumbles hard work
Esmereilda chapter 2 . 5/5
ur a royal git dumbles but minerva kicked Malfoy out like a boss
Caitlin chapter 18 . 4/7
Hi I was just wondering if this was the end or if you are planing on continuing it as it is the best thing I have read in a while.
Many thanks
Caitlin
Icigo Uzumaki chapter 18 . 3/14
This has been a FANTASTIC story! Harry using the Chamber to train is used in many stories but you have come up with an original take on it. It flows logically with the changes and is well written. I truly hope that you have not abandoned the story as I REALLY want to read more.
AlanLoo chapter 3 . 3/6
Although I'm enjoying the story so far, I can't help but complain about your inexistent punctuation. It would be soo far better if you properly put commas when needed.
SabannaLea chapter 18 . 3/3
Please update soon
mumphie chapter 18 . 1/22
A very good story! I enjoyed it immensely. I so want to know what happens the rest of the summer, and his schooling! I've never seen a take like this. I hope that someday your busy life: schooling, family, job, loss of muse, etc. will give you some breathing room and you can get time and creative muse back again (if that is the trouble) to come back and continue thus story. I am sad not to be able to move on to the next chapter! If not, could you tack on a chapter to say what you wanted to happen? It's not ideal, but it would be something...
Apteryx chapter 18 . 1/1
I like your ideas and how this is written. I sincerely hope that you will be able to continue and finish this story one day.
Tatum Grimes chapter 18 . 9/30/2019
nice, please update soon
FotoDi chapter 13 . 9/8/2019
Woah... Hermione is a calculating, self- entered bitch within her interior monologue.
I know many people keep their less attractive characteristics & motivations to themselves
in order to present a “front” to their peers and relations. However, Hermione should also be
at least partially driven by her LIFE DEBT to Harry. It is fascinating that muggleborn Hermione
also defaults to denial and cynicism with regard to Harry’s muggle relatives. Has Hermione also
been spelled/warded/cursed to ignore all the physical evidence of abuse & neglect in front of her?
The blood wards affect Harry’s muggle neighbors, teachers, and other authority figures/ What is
blinding Hermione? If it is her own ambition, arrogance, and righteous devotion to authority than
I will buy!

And what is up with McGonagall...? She is acting like a prune-faces puppet? How strange...
Poppy Pomfrey seems to be in a magical/ethical bind but she is at least aware of the contrary
forces. What about the others?
Filius Flitwick should be immune to Dumbledore’s machinations as an international dueling champion,
charms master, and being of dual heritage. Why is he being mute and passive? Severus Snape is also
powerful, highly intelligent, and very Slytherin. His “blindness” to Harry’s abuse must be due
to Albus’ interference. Potions Master Snape would never ignore child abuse especially by muggles.
Madame Pince is also a character who intrigued me — she would know that Dumbledore has
removed or spelled books about the Potters. As a proud and dedicated Librarian she should be infuriated.
Why hasn’t MADAME BONES of the DMLE not responded to Harry’s letters and disclosures. Not
only has her niece been endangered, but Dumbles has deliberately excluded DMLE involvement
in what could be described as the existence of a malignant magical WMD: WEAPON OF MASS DESTRUCTION. Oh yeah... Lady Bones will have a cow!

Question: Did Augusta Longbottom have to sign some form of a guardian contract for Neville?
She may be the Lady Dowager of House Longbottom BUT she is not a Longbottom by blood.

Just some random thoughts! I really am enjoying your story. I adore that Harry acted on behalf of Hagrid.
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