Loved the story, keep writing them

Great story, loved it

Mel, this may be one of the finest fanfictions I've ever read. Only a writer of your caliber could put together a story as exciting as this. It flowed beautifully and kept me tense a lot of the time and that is the sign of a great writer. That hospital scene had me on the edge of my seat. Deeks discovering he had a sister. The wedding and the vows were beautiful and Deeks joy at Kensi's pregnancy. I couldn't have asked for more. Thank you, Mel.

Kensi kensi kensi thats all this is cause densi fans aren't deeks fans just Kensi fans thats why its always jer this her that her pov her feelings her being victim her getting hurt her upset in every D"k"ensi fanfic!

IM DONE WITH NCIS LA SO CALLED FANS!

ALL YOU CARE ABOUT IS KENSI!

Brilliant! Love it so much. Best regards from France.

Loved this second story in your Kensi/Deek fics that I just recently found. (Also it kinda works out well for me that I just found them now, since I don't have to wait for updates. I just lose sleep because I stay up reading 'just one more' chapter)

And now I can't wait to start the third story!

So sweet. Love this story.

Good story, shame Seeks left NCIS though.

I just finished this story, and I recently read the one preceding it as well. You're a very talented writer and story-teller, which is very obvious in every chapter you upload. I have been a long time fan of NCIS:LA and of fanfiction, and your writing more than lives up to the expectations that come with being familiar with both. I genuinely enjoy reading your pieces, and I wish you much success with your writing in the future!

This story was riveting. I'm so glad you enjoy writing and have given me(us) these incredible stories to read. You are so talented. I love getting lost in this world you have spun together. The wedding was beautiful; everything I would hope for Kensi and Deeks.

Absolutely Great Story!

Again I saw, awwwwwww. What a great story. Definitely worth giving up my Sunday afternoon to finish. A terrific combination of mystery, action, romance, angst and family.

Awwwww. Love it! And glad Justin got a happy ending.

Exciting!

Yay, Competent Deeks figures it out. I like it. Another excellent interrogation. I liked the way the doctor's demeanor changed as Deeks put the pieces together. And I knew Kensi and Cody should have left their father unguarded- the killer was bound to want to finish the job.