Reviews for Evolution |
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![]() ![]() NUEVAMENTE KATNIS ME CAE MAL JAJAJ SIEMPRE ESPERA QUE OTROS LA INTERPRETEN , NUNCA PIENSA EN LOS DEMAS, SE QUE LA PONEN COMO UNA PERSONAL CERO SOCIAL, PERO VAMOS 3 AÑOS DE NOVIOS Y AUN ASI NO INVOLUCRARLO EN TUS ASUNTOS, NO DECIR ME VOY, PERO COMO LE HAREMOS PARA ESTAR JUNTOS? NO ANDA SOLO ENTIENDEME ME VOY, NO ES JUSTO... PERO BUENO TE QUEDO MUY LINDA LA HISTORIA |
![]() ![]() What kind of parents does she have who let her hand out at her grown boyfriends house like that. |
![]() ![]() Lovely |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think PM would be better |
![]() ![]() ![]() "I guarantee you will be the one who stops loving me." Well Gale. YOURE RIGHT |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm glad Katniss realized that she needed Peeta in her life. I'm not sure what she expected when she left him, whether she thought he would follow her after his graduation or maybe she thought their relationship would just fade away, either way, she's damn lucky he loved her enough to take her back after she didn't consider him at all in her plans. I've always wondered what he did during those months...most jocks would've been f##king anything that moved, I hope that wasn't Peeta. |
![]() ![]() love this story so much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well that was certainly a HAWT addition to the story! Bravo. |
![]() ![]() So what was the evolution? |
![]() ![]() Great story thank you |
![]() ![]() She doesnt deserve him. Shes a selfish bitch. |
![]() ![]() She is a beoch. Its her decision to go away to college. Didnt ask him but she expects him to stay in a relatinship with her? She never even asks him if he would cinsider it before she made her plans. She just expects him to go along with it. Selfish |
![]() ![]() ![]() it's a great story. when I started on the prologue, I was very excited to know about the deer archery hunting season. I was hoping to see more development on Katniss archery tournament in university and anticipate the moment where Peeta would find out the reason for Katniss to stay in athlete dorm was her amazing skill and how Peeta would be awed and admire her from afar. but that didn't happen. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a great story! Be encouraged and keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story. Who doesn't love Peeta being a sweet, quarterback and baker. Loved when Peeta and Katniss made Delly jealous just too cute. Then the family all getting along and Peeta asking Mr. Everdeen for Premission to marry Katniss even though she said no...but she came back. :) Just loved this story lots and the outtake wasn't bad either. |