Reviews for After the Storm |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gosh this story was amazing! I absolutely loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() :) amazing story! |
![]() ![]() That was incredible! They were so in character, and the last scene was so dramatic! Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whaaa! This story! It was great, but it had more twists and turns and surprises than I expected! I love it. Oh man. :) Great job, I enjoyed the story a lot, as evidenced by my inability to say anything coherent about it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, nice surprise ending there. I really enjoyed reading this story from start to finish. The characters were nicely developed and the plot was intriguing. However, the last couple of chapters did feel a little jumpy to me. Like a previous reviewer mentioned, it feels as if there are many unresolved bits and pieces. Though, that would make a sequel all the more appreciated probably. :) |
![]() ![]() Okay, I'm just going to say that reading this fic was one of the most awesome experiences I've had with reading a fanfiction, especially an avengers one, and this one being my first one to be exact and I loved it! I'll admit that I've just really dipped myself into the fandom, so I'm not what you would call the most full experienced with the characters, but from what I've read you've portrayed them wonderfully, and I believe that they were all fully in character. I can't tell you how many times I've laughed at Tony's antics, or how many times I 'awwed' or squished my cheeks together when Bruce and Clara were being awkwardly adorable. Or how long I stayed up with my friend who introduced me to this wonderful fic, and how we now share inside jokes inspired from it. And speaking of Clara, she is actually one of the best original characters I have ever read in a fic. Her over all personality, and the way she was written was great and made me fall in love with her character. I hope you know that I now want to do Bruce and Clara fan art! XD I also just loved the whole story leading up to how she was one of the Skrulls. I really wasn't expecting it, or her mother to be exact, to be aliens. But you being the author you were probably shooting for that, so you deserve all of the awards for it, as well as writing this fic. Now, I really do hope that you do a sequel for this story, but not just because you are a fabulous writer and can make magic words appear on paper, from your kissed by Thor hands, but I feel that they are some points in this story that just feel... unresolved to me. For example, with Bruce being able to turn into the hulk with control, or like how we just find out that Clara is part alien but there is no real closer with it? Or I should say we see nothing really extravagant happen with Clara being part alien, especially her relationship with Bruce. Like them both bonding over the fact that they are both 'monsters' (assuming that's what Clara thought of herself when she suddenly found out when she was part Skrull...) And both of them seeing that maybe that part of them really isn't a monster, but actually a part of who they are, and sappy stuff like that? XD And, Dude. What the hell was up with that Fury dying ending? Just what the freaking fuck! Fury not only dies, but Clara's mother is impersonating him?! If that's not an open ending for a sequel then I don't know what is. But anyway, if you're still reading this long ass thing, this was a great story, I very much enjoyed reading it, and I can't wait to see more of your work in the future. Keep up those amazing writing skills! :D SoaringWings |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Hehehe love those after the credit scenes! You did not disappoint! Cheers, AJ |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW. DUN DUN DUN! Nice ending. Very interesting and heart wrenching. Is there going to be sequel? I don't know what to do now that this story is finished...I love this story. You should be so proud of yourself. Bye :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() O: I really loved this story, I realllly love reading it. It was excellently written, and devotedly worked on. Thank you for making this, and thank you for thinking of the idea. -Greed |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is there going to be a sequel? I hope so! You've got talent! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love a happy ending! Great storie! Cheers, AJ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay, finally a kiss. And we find out what happens to Clara, after she realises she is an alien. Great job, the story has not lost it's awesomeness one bit. Are you going to write a sequel? I don't want this to be the end. But I must say, this has been a great story and read, and I will wait eagerly for the secret scene. Bye :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() SEQUEL! SEQUEL! It's too good to stop! Oh, an after scene... GET TO IT! lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please tell me theres going to be a sequel! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay several statements! this was totally awesome! And I was trying to figure out why she would be the adoptive mother not the birth one, when you blew my mind by saying she was both :D And whoah, just whoah, this was excellent. I think this is just perfectly excellent. Now Bruce and Clara are on more equal footing. And ohh Fury, ur going down, ur seriously going down! ;). So I really hope you post the next chapter soon (I did spend time reviewing all ur chapters, soo I think I deserves a new one ;) |