you ahve to improve more

Love love love

I do not usually like multi-viewpoint stories. They're often confusing, don't tie together well, too repetitive, etc. Your story, however, is beautifully done. I thought the characterization was very good (only quibble- I thought John's melt-down a bit much). I love how the different parts are woven together, and there is a cohesive narrative and continuity. Very well done. I hope you will write more Sherlock stories.

I enjoyed this story so much. All the character voices were spot on and this last Chapter reduced me to tears!
Thank you so much for this story. It's one of my favourites. x

Dare I say, it's perfect. Really. I have no words. Fantastic. Brilliant. Outstanding. One of my most favorite stories in this whole realm. Thank you for gifting me (us!) such a beautiful artwork.
Thank you, simply, for existing.

(Remember me? Yeah, I'm enlarging your shrine now. Would you prefer a massive lily pond or a Japanese tranquility garden?)

I liked the format. Good story.

Thank you for writing such a wonderful story. It was a joy to read from start to finish.

Fantastic. I love your Sherlock voice - though all the voices are convincing. Especially liked the part with John performing battlefield medicine in the ambulance. Well done and please write more.

I can't wait for the last Chapter. Instead of studying, I've been reading this and I'm glad I have. Love it!

I love Lestrade trying to say "I told you so." only to be one-upped by Sherlock's "He was taken. They have him."

So, it's either John or Sherlock. I imagine John is going to have some strong opinions about this. I can't wait to see what's next.

I can't handle this level of cliffhanger, this was all so brilliant I was clinging to the next button but it's disappeared on me. You do a wonderful job of getting in each of their heads and make them very rational and empathizable (totally not a word) and aww poor Molly. Thank you for sharing and I hope to see that last chapter before I die of agony.

Great again, thank you. I appreciate the lack of johnlock as I love their friendship and loyalty without the need for romance. So thank you!

Well here's a bit of sunshine in a snowy day (at least in my country) :D : Sherlock is so... ah *angry face* He always does this. He should just take responsibility for what he had done (even if he had his reasons), and resolve this problem by himself instead of sending his other friends to John. I wish, you would write something witch makes Sherlock realize that he made a mistake by not confiding in his friends in first place. You know like John helping him with this final problem or something like that. Anyway, I'm glad that your idea grow legs! I really like it! :)

I love your story, although it is indeed torture to see poor John suffer so. I suffer for a happy resolution (please). I am sitting on tenterhooks - which means essentially that I think you are a very good writer and I find the story very compelling. Thank you for sharing your talent and your vision of the story with us. I look forward to more! Bravo!

The only part I didn't like about this chapter was... "there are a couple more chapters left …"

"A couple more"? Noooo never stop writing this story! It's so good! I keep it open on my phone's browser and reload it everyday to see if there is an update.

Thank you!